托福獨(dú)立作文考題講解及分析

此范文為本人原創(chuàng)，題目來(lái)源TPO 27

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.

There is no doubt that the current job market is no walk on the beach for anyone just graduating from college. It becomes incredibly competitive to get a decent job nowadays.  If there is an opportunity of a secure job in front of us, should we accept the offer right away, or should we waiting for a more satisfying opportunity?  From my point of view, it is better to seize the opportunity first, especially if it is a secure job.

首先，從文章整體結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)看，本文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，有開(kāi)頭段，三個(gè)主體段，和一個(gè)結(jié)尾段。
在開(kāi)頭段作者首先進(jìn)行背景描述，說(shuō)當(dāng)今社會(huì)就業(yè)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)非常激烈，然后引入題目，說(shuō)如果有一份穩(wěn)定的工作機(jī)會(huì)，你是會(huì)馬上接受還是等待一份更滿意的工作。最后一句，明確表明自己的觀點(diǎn)：最好是先抓住眼前的工作機(jī)會(huì)，特別是一份比較穩(wěn)定的工作。

First of all, there is no perfect job, every job has its upsides and drawbacks, andthe definition of “satisfying” vary from person to person.   Take some decent jobs, such as lawyer or doctor,for example. These jobs come with considerable compensation and a respected title, but they also requiresuperior academic qualifications and professional working experiences. Besides, these jobs might be extremely stressful or even exhausting too. On the other hand, jobs like a clerk in the government or a librarian in a college or a cashier in the bank, might sound tedious and maybe only offer limited salary, but they are secure and usually do not have to work overtime. While, someone may look for jobs that most interest them or challenging, like real estate sales or freelancer artists, but they also have to realize these jobs are unstable, and they may end up barely make a living.

第一個(gè)主體段作者先提出世界上沒(méi)有完美的工作，每份工作都有它的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，而且不同人的對(duì)“滿意”有不同的定義。優(yōu)秀的文章中一定要有具體的例子，作者就具體舉了三類不同工作的例子來(lái)闡述這段的主題句。
銜接詞的使用：高亮的都是銜接詞。
詞匯：劃?rùn)M線的都是寫(xiě)作的高分詞匯。

When deciding on a job, someone are looking for security or high-payment, while  some people weigh  more on other aspects such as  working environment, further learning and training, supervisors and colleagues, opportunities for promotion, or corporate culture. It is very important to make clear what is the most significant aspect for us, and make the decision based on it. 

What’s more , the goal of life is to fulfill oneself, but not only to fill oneself. It is much more important to find a“job-life balance” rather than a “satisfying job.”Enjoy the eight hours at work but not see it as a task, otherwise the job will become a burden and feel tired. Set priorities and living those hours outside the workplace to the fullest.
In fact,  professional success usually requires the same time-management skills that are useful to find time for family, hobbies, and recreation.

In conclusion,  the worst situation is miss the opportunity and then end up unemployed. It is better to seize  what we can obtain  at the moment, then do not stop learning, preparing, and upgrading ourselves. Performing good work ethic  at any job, when we are prepared and become competent enough, better opportunities will always come to us.