雅思寫作：如何強(qiáng)化表現(xiàn)力

雅思寫作不能夠拿高分重要因素之一便是雅思寫作詞匯量掌握不牢，雅思寫作詞匯運(yùn)用的不準(zhǔn)確常常會造成一些中式英語文章，這樣容易讓考官對句意理解產(chǎn)生分歧，以下是雅思寫作詞匯量擴(kuò)展的技巧以及運(yùn)用方法。

 一、避免使用語意弱的“be”動(dòng)詞。

1、把句中的表語轉(zhuǎn)換為不同的修飾語，這個(gè)技巧并不是那么容易掌握，但是確實(shí)是一個(gè)能夠提高雅思寫組成績的非常實(shí)用的技巧。

例如：

Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

Revision: The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定語)

Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (轉(zhuǎn)換為并列結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語)

2、將作表語用的形容詞或名詞變?yōu)樾袨閯?dòng)詞。

例如：

1) Weak: The team members are good players.

Revision: The team members play well.

2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

3、在以“here”或“there”開頭的句子中，把“be”動(dòng)詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語。

例如：

1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.

Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.

Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.

二、多用語意具體的動(dòng)詞，保持句意簡潔明了。這樣的具體描寫可以讓文章看起來更具說服力，當(dāng)然也就可以提高雅思寫作成績了。

例如：

1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.

Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.

Better: She compares prices and quality.

三、盡量運(yùn)用主動(dòng)語態(tài)。之所以要這樣做，是因?yàn)楹芏嗳瞬幻靼资裁磿r(shí)候該用主動(dòng)，什么時(shí)候該用被動(dòng)。用錯(cuò)了，當(dāng)然也就談不上提高雅思寫作成績了。

例如：

1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.

Better: Charity has supported the organization.

2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

四、防止使用語意冗長累贅的詞語。想要提高雅思寫作成績就得使寫作的用詞簡單，生動(dòng)。

例如：

1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語或難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語。這是語言考試，不是專業(yè)考試，提高雅思寫作成績的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)在語言上，是文章的表現(xiàn)力上!

例如：

1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

以上即是雅思寫作詞匯量擴(kuò)充以及運(yùn)用的技巧，同學(xué)們在復(fù)習(xí)備考雅思考試的過程中，決不能放松對雅思寫作詞匯的學(xué)習(xí)，萬丈高樓平地起，只有精確熟練的掌握雅思寫作技巧詞匯的應(yīng)用，才可能在雅思考試的道路上跑的更快!

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