正確、巧妙地使用連接詞,可以使你的雅思作文更加生動,便于獲得高分!
表示增補的連接詞:and, as well as, besides, furthermore, moreover, not only...but also等
表示轉(zhuǎn)折的連接詞:however, in spite, though, but, otherwise, whereas, nonetheless等
表示原因的連接詞:since, as, so, because, why等
案例:He was born in a small village. His father was a teacher in the village school. His mother did the housework. He began to go to his father's school at seven. He graduated from it six years later. He went to the junior middle school in a nearby town. He studied at a senior middle school in the county. He was a good student there.
分析:盡管這段話中所有的句子都是正確的,但是句型單一,而且在八個句子中只有"His father"和"His mother"兩個不同的主語,其他句子都是以"He"開頭的。
修改:He was born in a small village. His father taught at the village school and his mother did the housework. He began to study at his father's school at seven and six years later entered the junior middle school in a nearby town. After graduating from it he was admitted to a senior middle school in the county, where he proved to be a good student.
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