雅思寫作中的14個(gè)Donts，你起碼做過(guò)3件！

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2022-05-17 來(lái)源：新通教育網(wǎng)igo.cn 作者：新通小編閱讀量：手機(jī)閱讀

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不管是雅思“小白”，還是久經(jīng)考場(chǎng)的老考鴨，大部分人都覺(jué)得寫作是雅思考試中zui難的部分。

因?yàn)槌艘獙W(xué)習(xí)小作文這種特殊作文的寫法，還要積累大作文不同題型結(jié)構(gòu)、相關(guān)話題詞組、句型和素材。

除此之外，還有許多書面寫作中要避免的問(wèn)題，很多人都容易踩坑~

下面就給大家介紹14個(gè)雅思寫作中的Donts（要避免的事情），如果你曾經(jīng)練過(guò)寫作，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)以下這些問(wèn)題，你起碼中過(guò)3個(gè)！

1.避免陳詞濫調(diào)

根據(jù)《牛津高階英漢雙解詞典》，“cliché”的意思是“a phrase or an idea that has been used so often that it no longer has much meaning and is not interesting”，即，“陳詞濫調(diào)；陳腐的套話”。

很多時(shí)候，這樣的“套句”對(duì)文章是沒(méi)有實(shí)際意義。

雅思寫作中常見(jiàn)的“cliche”包括：

As we all know that…
Every coin has two sides.
It cannot be denied that …
This is a highly controversial issue about…
First and foremost, …
Without doubt …
There is a heated debate about …
There are pros and cons …

2.避免縮略詞

英語(yǔ)的正式文體規(guī)定不能使用縮略詞，一定要將其完整形態(tài)寫出來(lái)，比如：

shouldn’t → should not
can’t → cannot [中間沒(méi)有空格]
don’t → do not
haven’t → have not
’ll → will

3.避免jue對(duì)化

雅思寫作中的jue對(duì)詞包括：

every
never
must
perfect
best
worst
most

以上這些詞語(yǔ)盡量不要在寫作中使用。

4.避免性別詞匯

這點(diǎn)很容易被大家忽略，以下是一些常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)及對(duì)應(yīng)的正確表達(dá)方法：

When a person listens to soft music, he or she will feel relaxed.

When people listen to soft music, they will feel relaxed.

If men do not start to protect the environment, their lives will be detrimentally impacted.

If people do not start to protect the environment, their lives will be detrimentally impacted. 注意：小作文中男女對(duì)比的情況下可以使用man/men或woman/women。

5.避免使用“YOU”

雅思寫作中，可以使用人稱代詞，如：

“I”，“my”，“me”，“mine”，“they”，“them”，“it”，“its”，“their”，“theirs”；

zui好不使用“we”，“us”，“our”，“ours”；

不能使用“you”，“your”，“yours”。
eg.If governments build railway and subway lines, you will not use your private cars.
If governments build railway and subway lines, people will not use their private cars.

6.避免強(qiáng)化詞

強(qiáng)化詞會(huì)使你的觀點(diǎn)顯得太jue對(duì)，不具有信服力。
話不多說(shuō)，直接來(lái)看例句↓↓
The new neck brace prototype was very promising because of its superb comfort and lean production cost.
The new neck brace prototype was promising because of its comfort and lean production cost.

7.避免口語(yǔ)和俚語(yǔ)表達(dá)

以下這些口語(yǔ)化表達(dá)，不適合于寫作這種書面正式文體，所以要避免：

Last but not the least …
In a nutshell …
At the end of the day …
cost an arm and a leg ..
kids
reckon
a bit
a lot of/lots of/a couple of
till

8.避免使用連詞斷句

像and, but, or 或者 so這種簡(jiǎn)單的連詞，放句子開(kāi)頭顯得較口語(yǔ)化，不太正式。
來(lái)看看2個(gè)例句：

Some people believe that living in big cities is harmful to people’s health. But in my opinion, it is not true.
Some people believe that living in big cities is harmful to people’s health. In my opinion,however, it is not true.
Learning history is beneficial to high school students. So, I think that history should be a compulsory subject in high school.
Learninghistory is beneficial to high school students. Therefore, I thinkthat history should be a compulsory subject in high school.

9.避免數(shù)字單詞混用
在雅思小作文中，十以下的數(shù)字（非圖中數(shù)據(jù)）需要寫單詞，如： The bar chart illustrates changes in the percentage of university students in 3 countries in Europe.
The bar chart illustrates changes in the percentage of students in three countries in Europe.

10.避免粘連句

在雅思寫作舉例時(shí)，很多人都習(xí)慣在句子結(jié)尾加上“...等等”，以代表豐富性，但其實(shí)這種表達(dá)是多余的。
eg.
Public transport includes vehicles for public use on the roads, airways,waterways, etc.
Public transport includes vehicles for public use, such buses, trains and aeroplanes.
Nurses must take into consideration patients’ dietary needs resulting from allergies, medication, medical conditions and so on.
Nurses must take into consideration patients’ dietary needs resulting from allergies, medication and medical conditions.

11.避免問(wèn)句

疑問(wèn)句只能在寫作題目中出現(xiàn)，但在你的正式寫作中就別出現(xiàn)了。
比如下述這種表達(dá)就是不恰當(dāng)?shù)模?/span>
Some people believe that males should share housework with females. Is it true?

12.避免引用/諺語(yǔ)/數(shù)據(jù)

雖然引用和數(shù)據(jù)能夠更有力證明你的觀點(diǎn)，但一不小心可能寫錯(cuò)，而且雅思考官也可能不了解相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)，所以不如直接不寫。
According to President Obama, …
Based on a research project, most males …

13.避免模糊性表達(dá)

一些模糊性表達(dá)包括：

things
stuff
that kind of thing
something

這些表達(dá)不僅口語(yǔ)化，而且指代不明確，所以也不適合在寫作中使用。

14.避免祈使句
一些考生在流程圖（flow chart）中使用祈使句，這在雅思寫作中式需要避免的，畢竟Task 1也屬于學(xué)術(shù)寫作的范疇。
考生可以將祈使句改寫為含有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的句子。如： Then, add salt and water into the pot.
Then saltand water are added into the pot. 以上的14個(gè)Donts建議大家收藏一下，在平時(shí)練習(xí)時(shí)，寫完作文可以拿出來(lái)對(duì)照一下自己有沒(méi)有犯以上提到的那些問(wèn)題。
當(dāng)然zui好是能夠熟記于心，等到正式考試時(shí)就能避免出現(xiàn)這些不必要的扣分點(diǎn)~
zui后提醒大家，一篇好的雅思作文還離不開(kāi)完整的文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局、切題的分論點(diǎn)、清晰的邏輯、地道的詞組以及準(zhǔn)確的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。