托福寫作范文分享之工作成功篇

 在寫作中經(jīng)常會有關(guān)于工作和成功的話題，很多同學(xué)對這一類話題感覺無從下手，今天我們從一片范文的角度來看一下文章的具體展開。

希望對大家可以與所幫助。

題目： Teachers should be paid as much as lawyers , doctors or businessmen.

A high salary represents this line of work is being recognized and appreciated. It has been argued that teachers should deserve to be paid as well as doctors, lawyers and businessmen. I think this is not such a bad idea.

First off, a decent paycheck would enhance teachers’ motivation. They have to spend hours checking books, studying materials and doing research before class to get fully prepared. And right after class there will be questions to be answered and papers to be graded, all of which take great patience and persistence. Naturally , some people may argue that such effort does not equal to that of life-saving duties in the ER or evidence-citing moments in the courtroom. But let’s look at this issue more closely. Can you imagine how our children will turn out to be if they are guided by people who do not take pride in what they do or who think their job is less respectable? Not only can good teacher impart knowledge, but they also pass on important values to the next generation. Who can deny the value of an educator who tries to help a juvenile delinquent get back on track? And who can make light of a teacher who manages to inspire an introvert who shows promise in painting to pursue arts? But it cannot be possible without giving these educators due respect and credit. Only when they are held in high regard will they start to show a better performance at work.

Additionally, this policy can help produce a more educated and competent workforce. When teachers receive a salary as much as lawyers and doctors, it sends a positive message to the talent who have excelled in all works of life. In the past, such talented elites would go for more profitable jobs; but the salary-raising policy would offer them an incentive to take teaching as their profession. In this case, students would learn from the best. A student who has his heart set on becoming a lawyer would be thrilled to find that he can learn from someone who had previously make partner in a lay firm. And for a young man majoring in medicine, there’s no better choice than to have an experienced doctor coach him. Jobs in such highly specialized areas like aerospace engineering, finance and IT all require extensive knowledge and proper guidance from a mentor. Without leading experts as teachers ,schools have no hope of ever cultivating a competent labor pool.

All in all, teachers deserve equally high salaries as their counterparts in other fields like business or medicine, for the benefits of their own self-esteem and the educated workforce they can bring to the society.

重點(diǎn)段落參考翻譯：第二段

首先，一份像樣的薪水可以提高教師的積極性。為了充分準(zhǔn)備，他們必須在課前花數(shù)小時檢查書本、學(xué)習(xí)材料和做研究。課后會有問題要回答，論文要評分，所有這些都需要極大的耐心和毅力。當(dāng)然，有些人可能會爭辯說，這種努力不等于急診室的救命職責(zé)或法庭上引用證據(jù)的時刻。但讓我們更仔細(xì)地看一下這個問題。你能想象如果我們的孩子被那些不以自己的工作為榮或認(rèn)為自己的工作不受尊重的人所引導(dǎo)，他們會變成什么樣嗎?好老師不僅能傳授知識，而且能把重要的價值觀傳給下一代。誰能否認(rèn)一個試圖幫助少年犯重回正軌的教育者的價值呢?又有誰能輕視一位老師，他設(shè)法激勵一位在繪畫中表現(xiàn)出追求藝術(shù)的希望的內(nèi)向者呢?但如果不給予這些教育工作者應(yīng)有的尊重和贊揚(yáng)，這是不可能的。只有受到高度重視，他們才會在工作中表現(xiàn)得更好。

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