托福獨(dú)立寫作論點(diǎn)判定

Independent Writing

對(duì)于Independent Writing部分，根據(jù)文章評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，獨(dú)立寫作應(yīng)該具有清晰地論點(diǎn)且有清晰地細(xì)節(jié)來證明論點(diǎn)是對(duì)的，現(xiàn)在就來簡(jiǎn)述一下論點(diǎn)的寫法

1. 什么是論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)

論點(diǎn)=這段文字的主題句=概括這段文字的整體概念

論據(jù)=讓我們的論點(diǎn)更有說服力

2. 一個(gè)論點(diǎn)需要的基本要點(diǎn)

是一個(gè)陳述句; 疑問句、感嘆句等不可用比較簡(jiǎn)潔，明了

3. 論點(diǎn)的廣義定論

論點(diǎn)=這段文字的主題句=概括這段文字的整體概念

稅收好(大觀點(diǎn))---- 政府有錢------建立很多有用的設(shè)施-------幫助很多人(中式)

稅收好(大觀點(diǎn))---- 幫助很多人(論點(diǎn))-----政府有錢------建立很多有用的設(shè)施(西式)

4. 怎么寫論點(diǎn)

A. 論點(diǎn)是容易展開的：細(xì)節(jié)是容易展開來證明論點(diǎn)是真的，不可以只寫論點(diǎn)，可以用多種細(xì)節(jié)來證明論點(diǎn)是真的，例如像解釋，舉例子等

B. 論點(diǎn)要完整：論點(diǎn)包括題干和中心思想，不可以在論點(diǎn)中只有一個(gè)思想，但是題干完全不提，容易跑題且不完整

C. 論點(diǎn)要關(guān)注于某一方面，不可以太寬泛,否則會(huì)顯得很雜亂

l E.g. Some working parents believe that children centers can provide best care for children, while others think other family members like grandparents can do this job. Which one is better?

Firstly, there are more professional teachers in children centers thereby causing parents prefer to send children to there.

Firstly, children centers could provide more professional educational care to students.

根據(jù)上題可看出，正確的論點(diǎn)應(yīng)該是第二個(gè)，因?yàn)榈谝粋�(gè)論點(diǎn)是一個(gè)比較難展開的細(xì)節(jié)，所以文章寫起來會(huì)出現(xiàn)“無話可寫”的情況，對(duì)于第二個(gè)論點(diǎn)，第一個(gè)點(diǎn)更像是細(xì)節(jié)支撐

論點(diǎn)是容易展開的

E.g. working alone when taking part in many activities. Do you agree or disagree with this way?

Firstly, working in a small group enables young kids how to work together with the others in the team.

Firstly, working in a small group enables young kids to foster some abilities and social skills.

問題同上，正確的論點(diǎn)應(yīng)該是第二個(gè)，第一個(gè)更像是對(duì)場(chǎng)景的描述，第一個(gè)造成的最后的結(jié)果就是第二個(gè);這也符合我們所說的，論點(diǎn)是一個(gè)最終的結(jié)果，一個(gè)概括的事物

論點(diǎn)要完整

E.g. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

To begin with, working in a big company is beneficial to enlarging one’s social circle.

論點(diǎn)盡量不要用it指代，要改寫題干

論點(diǎn)要關(guān)注于某一方面，不可以太寬泛

E.g. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes.

First of all, learning from mistakes is helpful for children.

First of all, allowing children to make mistakes and to learn from mistakes can help children to be independent.

第二個(gè)才是正確的，雖然第一個(gè)點(diǎn)也可以被展開，但是對(duì)于“幫助性的”這個(gè)詞其實(shí)基本上沒有細(xì)節(jié)意義，與其說是論點(diǎn)，這個(gè)點(diǎn)其實(shí)和觀點(diǎn);論點(diǎn)太寬泛，雖然能展開，但是方面涵蓋太多，導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果就是細(xì)節(jié)混亂，可能考生沒有辦法具體拆分。第二個(gè)就是一個(gè)很好地論點(diǎn)范本。

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