托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)深度解讀

我們今天先給大家看一下托福Independent task獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：原始分5分

an essay at this level largely accomplishes all of the following:

1. effectively addresses the topic and task

我們很多學(xué)生可以做到能回答問(wèn)題，但是不是所有學(xué)生都能有效回答問(wèn)題，尤其是碰到一些有特別限制的題目時(shí)，會(huì)出現(xiàn)答非所問(wèn)的情況，所以審題要清楚, 避免跑題。

比如題目： Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are now easier to become educated than in the past.，這個(gè)題不關(guān)心現(xiàn)在教育的水平怎么樣，有些同學(xué)講到學(xué)校里設(shè)備比以前更好了，這個(gè)就跟題目沒(méi)什么關(guān)系了。

又比如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should offer the internet access to the public free of charge. 學(xué)生寫(xiě)到 網(wǎng)絡(luò)能方便人們的生活。題目中說(shuō)到了免費(fèi)，你的討論中不能少了免費(fèi)，不能光講網(wǎng)絡(luò)的好處。

好了，我們現(xiàn)在就用第一篇的文章，來(lái)看看高分是怎么有效地回答問(wèn)題的。

First of all, advanced technology has made it easier for people to teach themselves at home. Thanks to the tremendous impacts of the information age, endless sources of education are provided through the broad network of mass media. Such intelligent devices like computers and other digital tools are easy to operate and thus could sustain people to complete self-taught courses in many fields. With simple clicks of the mouse, the learning process could begin and run smoothly at home. For instance, a rich supply of online classes helps create a vivid classroom atmosphere for the students. By following each step of instructions on the websites, knowledge could be gained and skills could be accumulated. Furthermore, useful reading materials should be downloaded and installed in portable digital readers. People no longer have to borrow printed books from the library or purchases piles of heavy books from the bookstores. Reading has become more convenient and access to a wide range of books is easier than ever. Besides, communication tools could be made full use of for learners to exchange ideas with their classmates and tutors online. This could definitely ensure studying efficiency.

從這個(gè)段落我們可以看出，作者主要是分析了對(duì)著科技的發(fā)展，人們不再局限于學(xué)校的傳統(tǒng)教學(xué)方式，人們可以借助于一些智能設(shè)備比如電腦等進(jìn)行自學(xué)。后面又開(kāi)始分析了我們這樣學(xué)習(xí)有多么方便，而且豐富的多彩的王桑課堂為學(xué)生提供了很好的教室氛圍，人們不再?gòu)膱D書(shū)館借閱讀書(shū)，人們可以讀更多的書(shū)，可以從網(wǎng)上下載，攜帶也更方便。

在另外一個(gè)中間段落中，作者提到了我們有了更多的學(xué)校教育的機(jī)會(huì)。 人們有了更多自由去自己制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃，也有了更多的學(xué)校和課程可供人們?nèi)ヌ暨x。In addition to the diversified channels of self-study, people today are also blessed with numerous choices of school education. More freedom is rendered to all the social members who could make their own learning plans and a large variety of schools and courses are available for them to choose.

好了，這是我們今天分析的我們獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作的第一個(gè)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，大家要好好體會(huì)。如果同學(xué)們想了解更多關(guān)于雅思雅思寫(xiě)作的知識(shí)，或者想咨詢(xún)雅思課程的同學(xué)，可以撥打 >>>400-618-8866 或 >>>【點(diǎn)擊此處咨詢(xún)】，得到新通西安語(yǔ)言培訓(xùn)顧問(wèn)的專(zhuān)業(yè)解答！