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雅思寫作成績是雅思總成績當(dāng)中非常重要的一環(huán),很大一部分同學(xué)最終不理想主要是因?yàn)檠潘紝懽鞑糠直容^拉分,所以導(dǎo)致雅思整體成績偏低,這是是非常可惜的,有鑒于此,新通教育小編為大家正路了開頭的方法,希望能給同學(xué)們帶來幫助。
開頭方法:
1、提出有爭議性的問題,激發(fā)讀者興趣,使其積極參與討論
例如在寫到警察是否應(yīng)該持槍這篇文章時(shí)作者說:
If police in the U.K. are able to go without guns and not have crime getting completely out of control then they have already set a fine example that other countries should follow. The fact that they are able to do this is an indication of their ability to control the flow of guns to the general populace and this makes citizens safer than anything else. To a civilian, taking guns away from criminals is more important than giving them to police.
提出這個(gè)有爭議的話題,激發(fā)讀者的興趣,使讀者積極參與到討論中來,讓大家各抒己見進(jìn)行討論。
2、引起讀者興趣的話題
例如在寫關(guān)于體罰的話題文章時(shí),采用這樣一個(gè)開頭:
It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father on Father' Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferent and even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue.
據(jù)報(bào)道,在父親節(jié)那天,珠海有個(gè)小男孩被爸爸打死了。充分的證據(jù)也顯示,經(jīng)常遭父母或老師虐待的小孩往往比較內(nèi)向、悲觀、冷漠甚至厭世。近來,關(guān)于是否應(yīng)該廢除體罰出現(xiàn)了一場激烈的爭論,老師、家長和專家各執(zhí)一詞。
當(dāng)讀者看到這個(gè)話題時(shí)產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣進(jìn)而引起了對這件事情的思考。
3、引用名人名言、諺語等作為文章的開頭
例如在寫到先天跟后天哪一個(gè)更重要時(shí),“Genius is two percent inspiration and ninety-eight percent perspiration” is the opinion held by Edison. This remark has been confirmed time and again by more and more people.
“天才是百分之二的靈感,百分之九十八的汗水”是愛迪生的觀點(diǎn),而且反復(fù)被越來越多的人所證實(shí),通過引用名人名言揭示了文章的主題,為下文很好地做了鋪墊。
4、對將要討論的話題進(jìn)行定義
例如在寫到Globalization時(shí):
Globalization-the international spread of products, ideas and information-is bringing the world closer together. But globalization is not a new concept. For thousands of years, nations have roamed the earth in search of new markets and new sources of raw materials for their own industries.
關(guān)于"全球化"這個(gè)名詞,考生并不陌生,但是如何用合理的語言來賦予它一個(gè)含義,這并非易事,上述的引言段就很好地做到了這一點(diǎn),先是從字面上詮釋了"全球化"的定義,進(jìn)而又從實(shí)際生活角度賦予了它另外一層含義。
再比如另外一道題目:
Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?
這題要求大家討論大學(xué)是提供職業(yè)技能還是傳授知識。從傳統(tǒng)觀點(diǎn)來看,大學(xué)是傳授知識的地方,為什么會(huì)提出要傳授技能呢?所以這里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考一下,大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已經(jīng)成為當(dāng)今教育的目的之一了,所以很多大學(xué)就轉(zhuǎn)移到以傳授技能為主了。
As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education,the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.
再看一例:
Environmental problem is too big for individual countries and individual people to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
本題話題為環(huán)境問題,考生也可用重述法對當(dāng)前環(huán)境問題進(jìn)行重述,這時(shí),可以用In modern society/ At present, 等表時(shí)間的介詞短語來引導(dǎo)一個(gè)敘述句型。
參考:In modern society, environment related issues have confronted ecological scientists, government agencies and the general public.
5、定義法
即通過對話題詞的定義的介紹,這種方法有一定難度,考生需要有淵博的知識,才能做到對名詞的解釋,但對特別明顯的詞語,考生可借鑒這種方法。
請看一例:
The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
本題中的話題詞為圖書館,可以解釋的詞也是圖書館比較方便容易。那么到底如何解釋呢,比如說圖書館在傳統(tǒng)意義上來看,是收藏書的地方,而現(xiàn)在因?yàn)榭萍及l(fā)展,使得圖書館的意義發(fā)生改變,從而引出話題。這里同樣可以用形式主語:
It is generally believed that public libraries are places with a large collection of books; however, the digital time has given .it a new means of storing and retrieving information.
雅思寫作的分?jǐn)?shù)提升的關(guān)鍵在于多輸入、多積累,作為一項(xiàng)對于語言應(yīng)用能力考查的單項(xiàng),需要同學(xué)們有一定的積累,才能將這些積累轉(zhuǎn)化成輸出,所以同學(xué)們在雅思備考的時(shí)候不但要進(jìn)行大量的練習(xí),也要進(jìn)行大量的閱讀和積累,幫助自己提升。新的一年已經(jīng)來到,馬上也要開學(xué)了,不知道同學(xué)們準(zhǔn)備如何度過新的學(xué)期呢?打算在習(xí)得一年拿到的小伙伴,給大家分享一個(gè)好消息:新通教育雅思春季班已經(jīng)開始報(bào)名啦,新通教育小編提醒您:考試千萬個(gè),第一個(gè),新年不學(xué)習(xí),考試兩行淚~想在西安學(xué)習(xí)雅思的同學(xué),或者還在猶豫著選西安哪家好的同學(xué),不要錯(cuò)過我們的雅思春季班哦。
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