雅思高分作文有哪些特點(diǎn)？

今天為大家分享的是作文的特點(diǎn)，希望看完這些高分作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之后，能給同學(xué)們的寫(xiě)作帶來(lái)幫助。

3.指示代詞的準(zhǔn)確使用

中文和英文在指示代詞上有較大的區(qū)別。中文習(xí)慣重復(fù)名詞，而英文則強(qiáng)調(diào)用代詞。如‘我今天把錢(qián)包丟了，我那個(gè)錢(qián)包可好看了。’而相對(duì)應(yīng)的英文表達(dá)是使用代詞而不再重復(fù)錢(qián)包這個(gè)名詞， ‘I lost my purse today, and it was so cute.’ 或者 ‘I lost my purse, which was so cute.’流暢度高的文章指示代詞使用正確，指向清楚。下面這兩句話(huà)當(dāng)中有兩個(gè)代詞it，但是存在指代不清的問(wèn)題：

Government’s investment is always the focus that people pay more attention to. Recently, itbecomes a controversy that whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions.

前一個(gè)it指代后面whether從句，后一個(gè)it指代government.為了理清關(guān)系，減少模糊，最好不用形式主語(yǔ)這個(gè)句型，而是直接把主語(yǔ)從句放在主語(yǔ)的位置上。修改如下：

Government’s budget is always the attention focus of the public. Whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions causes controversy.

4.段落的中心內(nèi)容與中心句

一個(gè)段落只有一個(gè)中心思想，這個(gè)中心思想通常會(huì)體現(xiàn)在一個(gè)總結(jié)性的句子當(dāng)中，這句話(huà)叫做中心句。中心句在學(xué)術(shù)文章中常常落在段首，以方便閱讀。中心句如同射擊的靶子，要直指文章主題，這樣后面的論點(diǎn)才不會(huì)偏離題目，因此非常重要。上面關(guān)于看電視太多的段落，中心句就寫(xiě)的非常明確。下面再給同學(xué)們一些句子，可以靈活應(yīng)用于立論段，即證明自己觀點(diǎn)的段落。

It is hard to argue with the fact that workers are the direct/ first beneficiaries of this working fashion.

There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.

Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind more than mass media.

The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.

A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable for many.

However, this does not mean that …

下面是一些可以用于讓步段的中心句：

there are certainly some minor downsides in 。。。

I admit that … is not perfect.

I understand why some people oppose 。。。

Of course there are some opposite voices against 。。

the disapproving voices also sound reasonable.

It is natural to regard a university as a phase preparing for a future job…

the other side of the argument is also valid.

Surely pushing their children towards academic study makes sense for parents.

You cannot be honest without admitting ….

關(guān)于寫(xiě)作就先跟大家分享到這里，如果同學(xué)們對(duì)于雅思考試或者感興趣，。練習(xí)是長(zhǎng)期的事情，需要?jiǎng)涌趧?dòng)手和動(dòng)腦，如果同學(xué)們只一味的看高高分作文而自己不動(dòng)手寫(xiě)練習(xí)的話(huà)，自己作文水平提高不會(huì)太快。

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