雅思寫(xiě)作當(dāng)中容易失分的小細(xì)節(jié)（二）

雅思寫(xiě)作成績(jī)是決定最終總成績(jī)的重要一環(huán)，但是同學(xué)們普遍在這部分失分比較高，所以小編專門為大家分析大家可能在那部分失分，希望能給同學(xué)們帶來(lái)幫助。

1. 詞性使用錯(cuò)誤

e.g. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of the traditional energy.

Instead of是介詞，而這里構(gòu)成to do(不定式)，只能用動(dòng)詞。因此，可改為：

One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditional energy.

e.g. Nowadays，some students study many subjects in university，which leadsto that they suffer great mental pressure.

Lead to中to是介詞，后面不能直接加句子，因此可在leads to后加一名詞，構(gòu)成同位語(yǔ)從句：

Nowadays，some students study many subjects in university，which leads tothe fact that they suffer great mental pressure. 或Nowadays，some students studymany subjects in university，which makes them suffer great mental pressure.

2. 從句的誤用和濫用

e.g. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to provide better education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure all citizens to have access to them.

“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定語(yǔ)，固定句式“the reason why…isthat…”why引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句連用，氣勢(shì)磅礴，這就是所謂的高分句型。

e.g. In this essay，I will discuss what those，who are two kinds of peoplein this topic，are how to think and how to choose. 實(shí)再迂回婉轉(zhuǎn)，不知所云。

關(guān)于當(dāng)中，容易失分的部分就先給大家分享到這里，如果同學(xué)們對(duì)感興趣，或者在雅思備考當(dāng)中遇到了難題，。另外，信通教育也為大家提供課程，如果同學(xué)們基礎(chǔ)比較薄弱，可以考慮通過(guò)培訓(xùn)的方式提高自己的能力與技巧。