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同意轉(zhuǎn)換雅思寫作的突破點(diǎn)

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雅思A類寫作即學(xué)術(shù)類(Academic)寫作,要求寫出來的文章是比較正式的文體,因而可以借鑒閱讀文章中的同義替換方式。為了深刻體會(huì)寫作中的同義轉(zhuǎn)換的重要性和必要性,新通外語(yǔ)小編先來帶大家看下面這篇議論文片段,體會(huì)一下無處不在的同義轉(zhuǎn)換。

雅思A類寫作即學(xué)術(shù)類(Academic)寫作,要求寫出來的文章是比較正式的文體,因而可以借鑒閱讀文章中的同義替換方式。為了深刻體會(huì)寫作中的同義轉(zhuǎn)換的重要性和必要性,新通外語(yǔ)小編先來帶大家看下面這篇議論文片段,體會(huì)一下無處不在的同義轉(zhuǎn)換。

The purpose of our study is to consider several methodological issues relevant to study of the monetary transmission process. These issues involve relative emphasis on monetary shocks as opposed to systematic policy adjustments; vector auto regression vs.Structural modeling research strategies...

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這里as opposed to等同于vs.(versus的縮寫形式),為了避免重復(fù),作者用了同義表達(dá)的技巧。

下面再來看一個(gè)典型的雅思作文片段:

The appearance of cars has caused many social problems. What is your opinion?

...I believe cars have indeed caused many problems in society and we need to reduce the use of cars.
First of all,we must consider the severe traffic caused by cars...

Another consideration is that cars generate serious pollution...

Admittedly,cars facilitate our travel and make people’s daily commute much easier than before. However, the adverse effects of cars significantly outweigh the benefits they bring.

這里的動(dòng)詞consider與名詞詞組another consideration的交換使用顯得作者寫作技巧成熟,也使得文章不單調(diào)重復(fù),也只有這樣的文章才能符合考官的口味,贏得高分!

下面再為大家提供幾段經(jīng)典的雅思作文范文節(jié)選,請(qǐng)仔細(xì)體會(huì)模仿。

【范文1】

Any government, whether rich or poor, cannot put every penny into education, even though it may be trying to improve overall conditions for education and to create much needed rewards for teachers. Private schools, on the other hand,help to narrow government spending on education by charging wealthy students expensive tuition fees in return for superior learning facilities and highly sought after staff. That is why governments throughout the world, whether developed or developing, encourage individuals and enterprises to establish private schools. The Chinese government has even put forward an incentive to support any interested parties, both in China and from overseas, to help promote and expand existing private education across the country.

【解析】rich和wealthy近義

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【范文2】

Firstly,modern people suffer from greater tension so that they have less time to communicate with each other. More and more people are living in urban areas,where life has a quick rhythm. Due to fierce competition, city dwellers have to be hard-working in order to keep up with the pace of city life. Everybody is busy all the time and the other increasing pressures at work deprive us of a casual way of life. Moreover, living in apartments in isolated blocks, we are becoming more and more removed from each other. And more often than not, it is no longer convenient for us to meet one anther freely.

【解析】tensions表達(dá)了和pressures完全相同的意思,但是這樣寫不會(huì)顯得單調(diào)重復(fù);劃線部分也是一種巧妙的同義改寫形式:have less time to communicate with each other意思就是becoming more and more removed from each other,但是用了同義轉(zhuǎn)換立即給文章增添了色彩!

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【范文3】

Activities in environments that pose great danger to humans, such as locating sunken ships,cleanup of nuclear waste, prospecting for underwater mineral deposits, and active volcano exploration, are ideally suited to robots. Similarly, robots can explore distant planets. NASA’s Galileo, an unpiloted space probe, travelled to Jupiter in 1996 and performed tasks such as determining the chemical content of the atmosphere there.

【解析】名詞exploration與動(dòng)詞explore交錯(cuò)使用,達(dá)到簡(jiǎn)潔卻又非常有效的同義轉(zhuǎn)換效果!

總之,在雅思寫作中,一定要學(xué)會(huì)并能靈活運(yùn)用這種百試不爽的“同義轉(zhuǎn)換”技巧。想一想,在現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中,你愿意和一個(gè)說話總是重復(fù)一種老套模式的人交談嗎?從這個(gè)角度想,你就能明白為什么你利用“同義轉(zhuǎn)換”雅思考官會(huì)給你一個(gè)好分?jǐn)?shù)了。

 

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