雅思寫作高分范文解析：教育類話題

雅思寫作教育類話題：2016年2月13日雅思寫作真題

Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school, do you think the benefits of home schooling outweigh its drawbacks?

王杰老師提醒考生一定注意審題。這篇題目考生很有可能看到了“在家教孩子”和“送去學(xué)校”后就想當(dāng)然的寫成了一段說在家教學(xué)，另一段說送學(xué)校如何如何，這樣就偏題了。題目最后問的實(shí)際上是“在家教學(xué)的利與弊”，因此我們只需要單單分析“在家教學(xué)”就可以了。

另外在雅思寫作的過程中一定要表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，無論是在開頭或者結(jié)尾，觀點(diǎn)一定要明確。論證要有理有據(jù)，且論據(jù)之間要緊密的同時(shí)又有層次感。在詞匯和語法上，可以在保證準(zhǔn)確性的前提上盡可能的發(fā)揮。

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雅思寫作教育類話題高分范文解析：

Nowadays various ways have emerged for children to be educated, among which home schooling became one of the most popular choices. I am of the view that the limitation of home education overrides its advantages.

解析：在開頭表明態(tài)度。非限制性定語從句的運(yùn)用，emerge，override等動(dòng)詞運(yùn)用，limitation是對(duì)于drawback的替換。

There can be little doubt that children who are exclusively educated at home could be taught in accordance of their aptitude. For instance, parents can adjust their teaching strategies based on children’s academic performance of different subjects, promoting their learning efficiency. Besides, such a convenient method also saves plenty of time, which would allow students to learn more than those at school.

解析：主體段第一段為讓步段，簡單的寫自己觀點(diǎn)的反方觀點(diǎn)，通過兩個(gè)分觀點(diǎn)來闡述，分別通過舉例，因果來論證。短語in accordance of their aptitude, 副詞exclusively, 非謂語動(dòng)詞表示結(jié)果，定語從句的運(yùn)用都是亮點(diǎn)。

However, the disadvantage of domestic learning cannot be ignored. Above all, the information reliability of parents is questionable. Unlike qualified teachers, most parents have not been trained professionally and thus cannot guarantee the authoritativeness of information. Hence the possibility that children may be misled is concerned. Also, those educated at home might be incapable of cooperating with other students since they have no opportunities to do group assignments or interact with others, giving the stress that team players are in urgent need in modern society. Last but not the least, it should be noted that network, which is essential to the development of individuals, is neglected in this case. Studying at home could give rise to isolation from their peers and lack of exposure to social network will prevent them from becoming the well-rounded talents they could have been.

解析：主體段第二段為支持的觀點(diǎn)，應(yīng)該著重去寫，采用三條論據(jù)，并通過對(duì)比論證，因果論證，反面論證來支撐主觀點(diǎn)。
注意綠色字體標(biāo)注的銜接詞，當(dāng)內(nèi)容比較多的時(shí)候，段落內(nèi)部要保持層次清晰。小小的代詞有時(shí)候可以起到“暗承”的作用，讓層次之間練習(xí)緊密。除了不同結(jié)構(gòu)來展示語法的多樣性以外，本段的高階詞匯和短語（紅色字體）是很大的加分項(xiàng)。

To conclude, despite the advantages of this new way of education, I still believe that home schooling does more harm than good and formal education at school is irreplaceable. Not only academic knowledge but also soft skills are necessary for students to achieve abundant accomplishments. To obtain these skills, children need to step into an open world rather than a comparatively closed environment.

解析：末段再一次強(qiáng)調(diào)立場并且做總結(jié)。

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雅思寫作教育類話題常用詞匯：

獲取知識(shí)：acquire/gain/attain/obtain/get access to knowledge
掌握技能：grasp skills
培養(yǎng)道德和美德：cultivate morality and virtue
培養(yǎng)守法公民：nurture law-abiding citizens
培養(yǎng)溝通技能：develop communicative skills
拓展?jié)摿Γ篹xpand one’s potential
激發(fā)學(xué)習(xí)興趣和動(dòng)力：stimulate learning interests and motivation
參與教學(xué)活動(dòng)：participate in/take part in/get involved in teaching activities
學(xué)以致用：apply the knowledge into practice
找到得體高薪的工作：get decent and well-paid jobs
樹立積極的世界觀：shape a positive world view
分辨是非黑白：distinguish right from wrong
個(gè)性：individuality
傳授，灌輸：instruct, impart … to …, imbue, equip with
重視：place emphasis on, attach importance to, highlight, put…as priority
忽視,低估：ignore, neglect, underestimate, place less emphasis on
自律的：self-disciplinary
職業(yè)培訓(xùn)：vocational training
理論知識(shí)：theoretical knowledge
同伴影響：peer influence
榜樣：role models

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雅思寫作教育類話題常用觀點(diǎn)一：Traditional learning style VS. modern learning style

The importance of teacher

1）information reliability (信息的可靠性)
Qualified teachers can tell students whether the information is authoritative or not.
2）student-oriented pattern（學(xué)生為中心的模式）
Teachers know how to help learners figure out a certain problem and how to motivate their learning interests by considering the learning styles of target students.

The advantages of other sources

1）the diversity of information（信息的多樣性）
   Learners can learn extensive and updated knowledge in various fields ranging from science to art.
2）learning motivation (學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)機(jī))
   The information shown by vivid picture and videos can interest young learners more.

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雅思寫作教育類話題常用觀點(diǎn)二：The purpose of schooling

The important of moral education

1）benefit individual development (有利于個(gè)人發(fā)展)
A student who does not know what rules should be obeyed and what behaviors are illegal but only understands academic knowledge might go astray due to the lack of social awareness.
2）belong to the basic responsibility of teachers（屬于老師的責(zé)任）
Educators are supposed to help students form positive worldviews and impart knowledge of laws and regulations to students so that they will become well-educated citizens.

The importance of academic knowledge

1）suit the practical needs of students (適合學(xué)生的實(shí)際需求)
If a student acquires professional knowledge and skills related to a certain fields, he or she will find well-paid or decent jobs.
2）achieve the main objective of schooling (完成教育的主要目標(biāo))
The major reason why parents send their children to school is that parents expect them to expand their knowledge range with the help of qualified teachers, and parents can tell their children how to distinguish right from wrong instead.

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雅思寫作教育類話題常用觀點(diǎn)三：Academic subjects VS. arts and sports

The importance of academic subjects

1）be conductive to job seeking (職業(yè)導(dǎo)向)
It is true that people who are equipped with knowledge related to science or finance can easily find jobs with a stable income and high status. However, the same cannot be said for people who study the arts.
2）benefit national development (有利于國家發(fā)展)
As for a country, its achievements in scientific research can have considerable rewards not only in elevated status, but also in the advantages that can be gained by applying the knowledge in various fields, such as the military, medicine, and so on.

The importance of arts and sports

1）enrich one’s spiritual life (豐富個(gè)人精神生活)
It is fantastic music that can make people forget their troubles. It is an inspirational movie that can give people a glimpse into a world they had never imagined. It is dancing that provides release for the heavy weight we carry.
2）increase one’s sense of national pride (提高國家榮譽(yù))
A country which gains success in the art industry and in sports competitions deserves the respect of others.

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