雅思寫(xiě)作：段落延伸性技巧

很多學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)總抱怨考分低，很大的原因是因?yàn)閷W(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)沒(méi)有進(jìn)行足夠的段落延伸而只是簡(jiǎn)單的羅列論點(diǎn)。現(xiàn)在的雅思寫(xiě)作考試的評(píng)分趨勢(shì)是更加的注重分論點(diǎn)的展開(kāi)延伸論證，而很多學(xué)生達(dá)不到這樣的要求或者忽視了這樣的要求。在審題清楚，頭腦風(fēng)暴后還需注意對(duì)于想出的分論點(diǎn)怎么進(jìn)行解釋以及舉例等，達(dá)到from general to specific的要求。

下面我們來(lái)看一個(gè)例題來(lái)進(jìn)行具體的分析：

Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 這個(gè)題目是一個(gè)討論型的題型，對(duì)于兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)都要進(jìn)行討論說(shuō)明。首先看第一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)Some people think that strict punishments for driving offenses are the key to reducing traffic accidents. 我們的分論點(diǎn)可以很容易的想到這樣做的好處是能夠讓人們安全駕駛，起到一種威懾的用。Strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. 對(duì)于這個(gè)分論點(diǎn)不能點(diǎn)到為止，需要再進(jìn)行延伸，舉例說(shuō)明這些懲罰包括什么比如罰款駕照吊銷等等，更具體的解釋比如這些使他們意識(shí)到自己的行為有嚴(yán)重的后果，會(huì)更加自律和警惕。所以我們可以這樣往后延伸：There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow the rules more carefully.

而第二個(gè)觀點(diǎn)Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. 延伸會(huì)稍微簡(jiǎn)單一些，要說(shuō)明具體的其他的方式，那么延伸的時(shí)候就需要從不同的角度去提出多樣的解決辦法，可以從個(gè)人方面或者政府的角度來(lái)說(shuō)明，但是也不能點(diǎn)到為止，比如從道路提升的角度，more attention could be paid to safe road design.后面必須繼續(xù)加上進(jìn)一步的解釋或者舉，F(xiàn)or example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly.

如果沒(méi)有充分的延伸擴(kuò)展，整個(gè)文章就會(huì)非常的干癟;其次議論文是要有論證和論據(jù)的，如果只是簡(jiǎn)簡(jiǎn)單單的羅列分論點(diǎn)，也不符合議論文的寫(xiě)作要求。很多學(xué)生會(huì)覺(jué)得這樣的細(xì)節(jié)延伸很難，其實(shí)延伸都是對(duì)事實(shí)情況的進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明，足夠的常識(shí)并且在練習(xí)以及考試的時(shí)候開(kāi)動(dòng)腦筋就不是一件難事。只有進(jìn)行了充分延伸的文章才是比較豐滿有說(shuō)服力的自然離高分也不遠(yuǎn)。

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