2016年2月28日托福寫作技巧獨(dú)家剖析

 2月28日托福寫作如何機(jī)智應(yīng)對(duì)？拿走不謝！新年的炮聲已離我們遠(yuǎn)去，大家又要整裝待發(fā)，踏上新一年的“殺托”之路了！今天，白新璐老師和大家分享，即將到來的2月28日托福考試中，托福寫作要做到“就事論事”和“由此及彼”。

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我們以下面一道托福寫作機(jī)經(jīng)題目為例，具體談?wù)勅绾巫龅揭陨蟽牲c(diǎn)。

Some people think at the start of a new year, it’s important to set a goal of improving a specific aspect of life. They call it a new-year resolution. Which of the following new-year resolution would you choose?

A. Help others in your community
B. Improve your health by exercising more and eating nutritious food
C. Manage your time better

這個(gè)托福寫作題目很應(yīng)景，春節(jié)剛過，再重度的拖延癥患者估計(jì)也得許個(gè)新年愿望聊以自慰。而且這個(gè)題目屬于“三選一”類題目，是最近愛出的一種類型題。

2月28日托福寫作技巧一：先要“就事論事”，保證不跑題

TIPS：我們?cè)诳紙?chǎng)上寫托福作文的時(shí)候，首先要保證的就是“不跑題”，也就是我們經(jīng)常說到的“就事論事”。

還記得在課上，我經(jīng)常給大家舉的例子么？如果有這么一個(gè)題目：having a dog can help its owner ease the pressure,然后開頭段說”除了狗以外，貓和兔子也可以幫助主人緩解壓力”。然后第二段說“貓如何幫助主人緩解壓力”，第三段說“兔子如何幫助主人緩解壓力”。

顯而易見，這個(gè)例子里沒能“就事論事”，題目命名讓談“狗”，無論同意不同意，我們必須將重點(diǎn)落在“狗”身上，不能顧左右而言他。

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那么，對(duì)于本文開頭給出的這道托福寫作機(jī)經(jīng)題目，首先要“就事論事”，也就是題目中說什么我們就談什么。比如下面這一段：

A harmonious community is the back rock of a healthy society, and the responsibility falls on the shoulders of every member of the society. The development of the society has offered people, especially young people, more opportunities than ever before, and thus they are no longer confined to one place to study or work like their parents were before. As a result, there are a great score of seniors and young children being left behind at home, creating many social problems. To ease the pressure requires the efforts from every community members. In the year to come, i will assemble my friends in our community to cook regularly for some of senior citizens who are unable to cook on their own. Also, my friends and I also plan to take to parks or museums once a month the kids whose parents are not around and their grandparents are not capable to do so. Although these efforts from my friends and I might not be much, i think they can bring some ease and happiness to these people. With more people joining in, we will be able to do more.

這一段就是直接談“help others in your community”有什么好處，但是如果從正面直接讓同學(xué)們談出兩點(diǎn)好處似乎有點(diǎn)難，這時(shí)候就是我們利用“由此及彼”的方法了。

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2月28日托福寫作技巧二：“由此及彼”

TIPS：這種方法需要同學(xué)們想一想題目背后體現(xiàn)了哪些具有“普適性”的邏輯，將這個(gè)邏輯抽離出來，應(yīng)用于其他領(lǐng)域。

為了充分分析這一題目，我下面以另外兩個(gè)選項(xiàng)給大家舉例分析。
 
第二個(gè)選項(xiàng)是“Improve your health by exercising more and eat nutritious food”。

多運(yùn)動(dòng)！吃健康食物！這是“專家”們給減肥人士的建議。但its easier said than done.說起來容易，做起來難啊。冬天這么冷，誰愿意早起，離開溫暖的被窩去跑步呢？同樣，綠葉蔬菜自然健康，但哪里比得上薯?xiàng)l，漢堡更加解饞呢？所以很多人失敗了。

而對(duì)于那些瘦身成功的人，我們經(jīng)常會(huì)說他們“真有毅力��！”對(duì)，這就是我要大家找到的“背后的原因”。通過多運(yùn)動(dòng)，少吃肉換來的“毅力”能運(yùn)用與其他領(lǐng)域么，當(dāng)然可以！

By exercising more and eating nutritious food I cannot only improve my health, but, more importantly, I will enhance my persistence. It might be easy to get up early to run or have health dinner once or twice, but it takes great persistence to keep doing so for a month, a year or even longer since there are always temptations out there like a warm bed or a delicious hamburger. I believe once I can overcome these temptations, I can also apply the persistence to other aspects of my life. Being a writer has always be my dream. I tried to write a book before but never finished it because of my heavy schedule or my laziness. With the persistence I acquire by exercising more and eating nutritious food, I think i will be able to finish my book and do not procrastinate again.

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再說說第三個(gè)選項(xiàng)：Manage your time better

合理管理時(shí)間背后無非一個(gè)“省”字。如果我們“就事論事”，那省得自然是“時(shí)間”；如果我們“由此及彼”，那我們省的還有“精力”。精力省了下來，我們工作生活的壓力自然就沒這么大了。

An effective management of time can alleviate the pressure. Sometimes it may seem that there is never enough time to do everything that need to be done. This can lead to a build up of stress. I bet most of us have been in such situations where we got angry, started to cry or said something we regretted because we found nothing’s achieved even though we’d worked all day long. This negative emotions would keep us from working, let alone working effectively. To deal with it, a better time management is required. For example, we should deal with things according to its priority and urgency, and spare ourselves from constant trivial matters. Also, we should keep track of the progress to make ourselves feel in control. By managing our time effectively, not only will we be getting things done, finishing tasks will give us a sense of accomplishment and spur motivation.

白新璐老師溫馨提示，這樣，一段“就事論事”，一段“由此及彼”，更顯得段落間的層層遞進(jìn)，使論證更加合理。希望這次分享的2月28日托福寫作思路能對(duì)大家有所幫助。GOOD LUCK!

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