2016年1月9日托福寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)

題目1：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.

審題：拿到這個(gè)題目，我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)題目當(dāng)中有個(gè)明顯的絕對(duì)詞most, 類(lèi)似的絕對(duì)詞還有best, only等，如果這個(gè)題目沒(méi)有用這么絕對(duì)的表達(dá)，那么我們可以寫(xiě)成同意，但是如果出現(xiàn)了絕對(duì)詞，那么建議同學(xué)們寫(xiě)成不同意。如果題目中說(shuō)在ABC中A最大，假設(shè)我們不同意這種說(shuō)法，那么有可能出現(xiàn)以下這些情況，C>A>B,B>A>C,C>A=B,C=A>B,C=A=B,今天給大家介紹的是寫(xiě)成C=A=B這種方式，類(lèi)似于小時(shí)候別人問(wèn)你，你是喜歡爸爸還是喜歡媽媽?zhuān)�想必大部分同學(xué)會(huì)回答一樣喜歡。

開(kāi)頭段：開(kāi)頭段我們需要做三件事情：改寫(xiě)題目+亮明自己的觀點(diǎn)+理由如下，針對(duì)此題目，具體寫(xiě)出來(lái)就是這樣，Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I believe that other factors are equally important. To verify the validity of my perspective, I will give some solid reasons.

主體段1：在第一個(gè)主體段中，我們可以先肯定下salary確實(shí)是人們?cè)赾hoosing jobs時(shí)候的重要考慮因素，那么主體段我們采用的寫(xiě)法是先寫(xiě)出中心句，再針對(duì)中心句進(jìn)行展開(kāi)，展開(kāi)時(shí)候我們主要使用說(shuō)因果以及做對(duì)比的方法。具體寫(xiě)出來(lái)就是這樣：
　　On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family. 

主體段2：在接下去的一個(gè)主體段中，我們可以找一下有沒(méi)有哪些因素也是人們?cè)谶x擇工作時(shí)候的重要考慮因素，并且我們?cè)趯?xiě)的時(shí)候就寫(xiě)成這些因素跟salary是同等重要的，大家不必在這寫(xiě)成其他因素更加重要，一旦寫(xiě)成更加重要，那我我們又需要進(jìn)行對(duì)比，寫(xiě)成同等重要，既避免掉這一步，因此我們可以寫(xiě)在選擇工作時(shí)候，跟salary同等重要的還有很多，包括工作氛圍，成就感，能否為社會(huì)做出積極貢獻(xiàn)等等，具體寫(xiě)出來(lái)就是這樣：
　　Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly, many people’s feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society. 

結(jié)尾段：在結(jié)尾段我們只需要重申下自己的總觀點(diǎn)即可，寫(xiě)出來(lái)就是這樣, To put it into a nutshell, based on the reasons above, we can finally reach a conclusion that while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators.

題目2：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the best way to teach children to cooperate with others is through team sports at school.

托福寫(xiě)作范文：
　　It is argued by some people that the team sport in school is the best approach for children to learn how to collaborate with other people. For me, I disagree with this statement, because I think other ways are as good as team sports. To verify the validity of my perspective, I will give some solid reasons.

There is no denying the fact that the team sport is a good choice to give children the sense of cooperation. Children need to cooperate with their peers or their classmates closely, if they want to achieve the final success in many team sports in school, such as basketball or relay race, instead of working alone. In the long term, teenagers can be someone of cooperative spirit who pays attention to collaboration with others.

However, there are also other methods which can give children the sense of cooperation. Firstly, children can learn cooperation through group work. Teachers can assign some group work about some academic subject, and as students have different advantages, they can take on some tasks accordingly. Female students who do things carefully can be responsible for collecting data and giving a presentation, while those male students who are adept at logical thinking can analyze the data collected by female students. Plus, joining clubs in school can also cultivate the ability to cooperate with others. There are many social activities which are available in school. By joining these activities, such as looking after homeless seniors or advocating people to protect the environment, teenagers need to cooperate with their group members to achieve the goal, which can also foster their awareness of responsibility.

To put it into a nutshell, we can clearly see that while the team sport is a choice to give children the sense of collaboration, other methods are just as effective as the team sport.

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