11月21日雅思寫作真題及范文

A卷小作文：1962-2002 5個(gè)不同國家占澳大利亞移民比重變化

A卷大作文：社會家庭類，why+how 一些社會中父母角色不同的原因及未來發(fā)展趨勢

B卷小作文：柱圖，5個(gè)國家的health spending GDP

B卷大作文：教育類， to what extent A/D 過于強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)術(shù)表現(xiàn)，要增加vocational education培養(yǎng)實(shí)用型人才

從這次的題型和問題來看，大家反映寫作部分比前幾日的加試要難。小作文加試出現(xiàn)了非圖表類，這次兩套題都是圖表類了。兩套大作文題目在09-10年的舊題中可以找到相似的問題，今天在這里分享一些A卷大作文的寫作詞匯：

Fulfill one’s responsibility 承擔(dān)義務(wù)

Contribute to 造成，影響

Face to face 面對面

Spoil a child 溺愛孩子

Well-behaved 表現(xiàn)良好

Parenthood 家教

Breadwinner 養(yǎng)家糊口

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一篇修改后的學(xué)生范文：

People always say that men and women act differently in many aspects. In some countries, they have quite distinct roles to play in parenthood.

One of the possible reasons for this consequence may lie in their male-dominated society. In some part of the world, some stereotyped considerations such as ‘men should be the breadwinner in a family’ ‘ the virtue of women is staying at home, doing cleaning work and take care of her family ’ have been in existence for centuries. This difference leads to childrens’ different decision-making plans. More young men may choose to pursue their dreams of becoming professionals and experts, while more young women may prefer hiding their talent, devoting themselves to some unavoidable chores.

In addition, varied education background and living environment can lead to diversified parents’ personalities, which can also contribute to their offspring’s behaviours. Mothers are more likely to be tender and soft; they would avoid punishment as much as they can, so it is quite possible that a kid is spoiled with only a mother like this. However, fathers’ high expectations and relatively strict requirements on their children may correct the young’s misbehaviours. As a result, the combination can become a good balance in families so that children can be well-behaved.

As far as I am concerned, this gap between men and women will be less in the future for there is an increasingly number of people who are fighting for women’s right of receiving better education, getting fairly paid and so on. It is also notable to see that more males are being active at home, nursing children and spending more time communicating with them face-to-face. 

To conclude, men and women should fulfill their responsibilities in a family and share more duties together to create a better living atmosphere to all. 

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