托福寫作需避免的開頭方式（二）

“好的開頭是成功的一半”，同理，一個不好的開頭能毀了一篇托福作文。下文小編為大家盤點了托福寫作需避免的開頭方式，希望對各位同學(xué)有幫助！ 

6、托福作文中需要避免的開頭方式—過分簡單沒有重點

典型失敗案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

“害死人”托福寫作開頭之七：用詞不當 表達不準 (噴血指數(shù)：☆☆)

典型失敗案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

7、托福作文中需要避免的開頭方式—意思重復(fù)原地踏步

典型失敗案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

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8、托福作文中需要避免的開頭方式—中國俗語胡亂翻譯

典型失敗案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

正確說法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”。

9、托福作文中需要避免的開頭方式—觀點武斷 態(tài)度強硬

典型失敗案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed。

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

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