2014年4月26日雅思A類大作文范文

2014年4月26號雅思大作文A類

People can work or study on the internet without going to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? (Words =333)

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第一段：

1社會背景 +正向 /反向的觀點 + 自己的觀點

社會背景： 網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及在為人們提供了更加靈活的工作方式與學(xué)習(xí)方式，也對其產(chǎn)生一定程度的影響與改變.

正向觀點： 相當(dāng)一部分人認(rèn)為，在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的推動下，人們足不出戶可以完成學(xué)業(yè)以及工作任務(wù).

自己觀點： 我對此持有反向觀點, 這樣做法，會導(dǎo)致效率低下 以及不利于人們自身的發(fā)展

The popularization of the Internet furnishes people with flexible manners of working and studying as well as generates impacts and changes on them to some extent. A considerable portion of people deem that people can complete their studies and work tasks through the Internet without stepping out of their houses. Nevertheless, I hold opposite viewpoints that such practice can result in inefficiency and can go against the development of people themselves. =71

第二段：論點+論據(jù)+例證+結(jié)論

論點： 這種做法的明顯的缺失——體現(xiàn)在——學(xué)習(xí)或工作效率的降低

論據(jù)： 不適合的環(huán)境——妨礙——人們的正常的學(xué)習(xí)或工作狀態(tài).

例證：很多人都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，在家或者公共場所(不包括圖書館)，在學(xué)習(xí)或工作的時候,往往由于缺乏監(jiān)管和良好的氛圍以及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)絡(luò)無法抵制的誘惑力，無法專注，使得學(xué)習(xí)或者工作進(jìn)展緩慢。

To begin with, a distinct limitation of such practice is reflected in low efficiency. In other words, unbefitting circumstances hamper people’s studying or working quality. For instance,numerous people have experience in having concentration difficulties when studying or working at home or in public places (excluding libraries) due to the absence of supervision and favorable atmospheres as well as the irresistible lure of the Internet, which renders slow progress of study and work. =73

第三段：論點+論據(jù)+例證 生活條件

論點： 另外一個不良的影響——體現(xiàn)在—不利于人們積極健康的發(fā)展

論據(jù)： 依靠網(wǎng)絡(luò)而不融入集體中學(xué)習(xí)或工作——人們就無法獲得良性發(fā)展

例證： 人們處于一種散漫的，放縱的自由，個體的環(huán)境中，去工作和學(xué)習(xí)，會形成性格的孤僻，養(yǎng)成不規(guī)律的作息，缺乏與他人的合作與溝通，從而會導(dǎo)致人與人之間冷漠與隔閡，人們變得迷茫，消極甚至墮落。

Secondly, another undesirable impact is embodied in the constraint of people’s adequate development. Conspicuously, merely relying on the Internet instead of integrating in collective study and work can cause failure in obtaining benign progress. For instance, people study or work in a closed, lone and solitary surrounding tend to form unsociable personalities, develop very irregular daily schedule and lack communications with others, which can render people emotional indifference and estrangement. Meanwhile, they also become confused, passive and even degenerate.=79

第四段：讓步段 ： 另一種觀點合理性+對此觀點加以反駁

另一種觀點：

論點：必須承認(rèn)地，人們僅僅依靠互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的這種工作和學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)是有其合理性的

例證: 更加人性化和靈活，降低公司運營成本，豐富的學(xué)習(xí)資源，以及滿足不同人的工作和學(xué)習(xí)需求。

對此觀點反駁：

論點：這種狀況所帶來更多不良后果與之優(yōu)勢相比。

原因：缺乏有效的監(jiān)督體系以及人們自身控制力的缺乏，虛擬網(wǎng)絡(luò)的誘惑，會極大的分散人們對于工作或?qū)W習(xí)所投入的時間精力，甚至，妨礙了正常的社會生活和社會次序，對于經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展也會造成

致命的打擊

Admittedly, working or studying online has its own rationality, because it is more convenient, flexible and inexpensive. Besides, the internet offers more affluent resources to satisfy different demands of people. However, online work or study can bring about more adverse outcomes in comparison with its benefits, because the absence of supervision and self-control as well as temptation from the virtual network can mostly distract people’s attention to work or study and may even obstruct their social life and living orders, which might exert a fatal blow to the economy. =89。

第五段：結(jié)論段：總結(jié)觀點+提出建議

總而言之： 對人們自身持續(xù)發(fā)展的阻礙以及 學(xué)習(xí)或工作效率的負(fù)面影響 體現(xiàn)了 僅僅依靠網(wǎng)絡(luò)而缺乏適當(dāng)?shù)墓ぷ骱蛯W(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境的劣勢

In brief, obstruction to people’s development and negative impact on efficiency reflect the inferiority of working and studying on the internet.=21

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