【教師講壇】你會正確運(yùn)用短語嗎？！

葉艷霞 溫州分校 專職老師

寫作中同學(xué)們常常會覺得短語不會用，以至于常常寫出中國式的原創(chuàng)短語，從而影響寫作分?jǐn)?shù)。如下這篇學(xué)生作文：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your parents were children.

The first convincing reason for my statement is that modern people now face  ( 可以改為are subject to 遭受著…) high-pressured lifestyle and fierce competition. There are occasions on which people have to work hard in order to afford to heavy loan from the bank and raise family. In current society, employe s will lose their (are likely to 可替換will,can 等)job if the cannot stand out in the workplace. When they feel peer pressure so that you have to relieve stress by drinking wines, participating in extreme exercise and even committing to crime, which is bad to（exert …influence on 對…影響不好的） public’s physics and psychology well-being. By contrast, the authority provides sufficient decent jobs for adults and my parents live by a rule they were children.

以上段落中，學(xué)生可以把面臨著遭受著（問題）的have,替換成 be subject to,同樣也是遭受的意思，可以理解成 suffer from. 另外， will ,can ,should等情態(tài)動詞可以換成 be likely to, tend to , be supposed to等委婉點(diǎn)的詞； 同學(xué)們在寫作中總是會很習(xí)以為常的按照中文思路翻譯出來自己想表達(dá)的，如 對…有壞處，自己寫成be bad for,這是非常口語，甚至不正確的表達(dá)方法，可以改成exert …influence on . 下面這些句子同學(xué)們可以練習(xí)看看，寫完之后可以結(jié)合參考答案，自己是否用正確的短語？

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越來越多的人意識到成功和自身的努力有關(guān)。

人們普遍認(rèn)為交通事故和頻繁的使用手機(jī)有關(guān)。(there is a direct link between..)

公共交通的改善使人們改變他們的出行方式，這將會減少空氣污染，交通阻塞，從而美化環(huán)境。(enable …to)

學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)國際新聞很重要，盡管也存在一些弊端。(despite)

廣告給人帶來很多好處，盡管也存在一些缺點(diǎn)。

個人的行為或思想/政府和企業(yè)決策/ 起重要作用。 （play a …role in）

一個簡單的例子是如果人們都不用一次性產(chǎn)品，那么商家就會生產(chǎn)其他環(huán)保產(chǎn)品。

總所周知，先進(jìn)科技發(fā)展/ 縮短了人人與人距離。

不可否認(rèn)，因特網(wǎng)的普及使人們業(yè)余生活變得比以前豐富，人們可以瀏覽網(wǎng)頁，查資料和看電影等。

一個令人煩惱的趨勢/ 長時(shí)間看手機(jī)或電腦/有害身心。

11現(xiàn)在白領(lǐng)面臨著各種各樣的小疾病以及壓力。

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1.An increasing number of people believe that/ It is generally accepted that there is a direct link between success and diligence.

2.It is generally acknowledged that there is a direct link between road accidents and the frequent use of cellphone.

3.The improvement of public infrastructure enables citizens to alter their way of going out, which , to some extent, reduce the air pollution, ease the traffic and better/ beatify the city.

4. It is of great significance/ value for students to learn international news, despite some of its demerits.

5.It is of great significance to have advertisements, despite some of its demerits.

6.Individual’s will and behavior tend to play an indispensable role in Government’s policies and company’s strategies.

7. A case in point is that if individuals refuse to use disposal products, including throw-away chopsticks ,spoons and plastic shopping bags, companies are likely to produce environmental-friendly substitutes./ alternatives.

8.It is widely acknowledged that the accelerated / advanced technological development shortens the human relationship.

9.There is little doubt that the widespread of internet/ popularity/ wide access to internet enriches individual’s life, by which users browse web pages, search the information as well as watch the latest movies .

10.However, a disturbing trend is that using cellphones or computers for several hours in succession may bring about disastrous effect/ pose a long-term threat to users’ physical and psychological well-being.

11.A common phenomenon is that white-collar workers nowadays are subject to various kinds of diseases and high pressure.

所以，想正確運(yùn)用短語，就是注意平時(shí)不斷積累，并且勇于練習(xí)，并勇于把短語運(yùn)用到平時(shí)的自己寫作中去!

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