2014年3月15日雅思A類大作文范文解析

2014年3月15日雅思考試A類大作文題目：

Some people think it is important for all the cities and towns to have large outdoor space for public use, such as parks and squares. Do you agree or disagree?(Word account=297)

2014年3月15日雅思考試A類大作文思路解析及范文：

第一段： 社會背景+正向/反向觀點+自己觀點 (1 客觀因素/外因 2 主觀因素/內因)

社會背景： 城鎮(zhèn)規(guī)劃的公共場所在某種程度上影響城鎮(zhèn)的發(fā)展

正向觀點：一些人認為—在城鎮(zhèn)的廣場以及公園的建立具有重要的意義。

自己觀點： 我認為這樣一種做法有利于 人們身心的健康 以及 城市居住環(huán)境的改善

The scheme of cities and towns in public places has influenced urban development to some extent. Some people deem that the establishment of square plazas and public gardens is essential. After serious consideration, I approve that such a practice is conducive to people’s physical and psychological health as well as the improvement of residential environment in urban areas. =58

第二段：論點+論據(jù)+例證+結論 【雅思寫作咨詢】

論點：大型休閑廣場的建立——有利于——市民的鍛煉身體與放松心情

論據(jù)：大型室外場所——有助于市民的身體健康以及進行娛樂休閑活動。

例證： 在城鎮(zhèn)的大部分人都承受者來自生活的各個方面的壓力，產(chǎn)生焦慮的情緒，這些娛樂場所可以緩解市民的這些壓力與焦慮，以保持健康的身體與愉悅的心情。

結論：從這個角度講，這樣的公共場所對市民的健康起到了重要作用。

To begin with, outdoor space provides residents with a public place for physical and mental relaxation. In other words, setting up large-scale plazas contributes to maintaining citizens’ health of body and mind by enabling more entertainment and leisure activities. Since a majority of people in metropolises and towns tend to endure higher pressure, public sites can make it possible for citizens to relieve tension and anxiety and to stay healthy and joyful. From this point, public outdoor places play a significant role in improving residents’ health conditions. =87

第三段： 論點+論據(jù)+例證+結論 【雅思最新機經(jīng)】

論點：公共的休閑的場所— 有助于——改善城市生活環(huán)境

論據(jù): 戶外公共休閑娛樂場所——意味著——為市民提供更適合宜居的生活環(huán)境。

例證： 很多大型的公園以及廣場使得城鎮(zhèn)更加具有人文氣息,在很大程度上改善了城市的面貌，增加了城市的,從而提升了對于城市生活質量

結論：因此，室外公共場所的建立符合城市化的需求。

Furthermore, communal and leisure places can conduce to improving urban living surroundings. Conspicuously, establishing such sites means furnishing citizens with more favorable living surroundings. For example, good-sized parks and squares endowed conurbations and towns with a humanistic flavor, making metropolises better places to live in and enhancing residents’ quality of life at the same time. From this point, the availability of public places is an integral element in urban development. =70

第四段：讓步段 另一種觀點合理性+對此觀點反駁 【雅思培訓咨詢】

另一種觀點合理性：

大型的戶外工廠與公園的設計尤其不合理的因素，例如減少日益緊張的居民住宅面積，(結果)影響城市居民生活質量以及降低人們對城市生活的滿意度。

(對此反駁)：

合理的公園以及廣場的規(guī)劃是城市化發(fā)展的必然

原因：

1 居民生活質量與生活環(huán)境的實際需求

2 城鎮(zhèn)的自身的發(fā)展。

Admittedly, good-sided communal sites also have a negative impact on urban development, such as to scale down the residential area which can affect living quality and residents’ happiness to some extent. However, a reasonable scheme including parks and squares in urban design is an inevitable trend, in view of citizens’ higher living requirements as well as the development of metropolises and towns themselves. =63

第五段：總結觀點+提出建議

總結觀點：市民的身體健康 +城市生活環(huán)境的改善——體現(xiàn)了——在城鎮(zhèn)建立公共休閑場所的合理性。

In brief, citizens’ relaxation requirements and improvement of urban surroundings present the preponderance of setting up public leisure places. =19

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