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題目：It is important that towns and cities are attractive so money should spend on works of art ( like paintings and statues) in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (words= 326 )

題目分析：城市成為吸引人的地方是很重要的，因此錢應(yīng)該花在公共場(chǎng)所的藝術(shù)品上。多大程度上同意還是不同意?

關(guān)鍵詞分析：

背景關(guān)鍵詞：Towns, cities, attractive place

論點(diǎn)觀點(diǎn)詞： money --on works of art – public places.

觀點(diǎn)： 不同意

為增加城市魅力，Money 應(yīng)該花在：1、住房條件；2、增加學(xué)習(xí)工作機(jī)會(huì)。

思路分析+范文：

第一段： 社會(huì)背景+正向/反向觀點(diǎn)+自己觀點(diǎn) (1 客觀因素/外因 2 主觀因素/內(nèi)因)

社會(huì)背景： 城市中——豐富的教育資源以及工作機(jī)會(huì)——吸引人們

正向觀點(diǎn)：一些人認(rèn)為——錢花在藝術(shù)品上——為增加城市魅力

自己觀點(diǎn)： 我認(rèn)為 合理做法1改善住房條件 2 增加機(jī)會(huì)

The affluent educational resources and job opportunities in conurbations and towns are what drive most people from other regions. Some people deem funds should be invested in works of art to aggrandize cities’ attraction. However, after serious consideration, I am convinced that a more reasonable and practical way to strengthen urban appeal is the investment in improving housing conditions and increasing opportunities.

第二段：論點(diǎn)+論據(jù)+例證+結(jié)論

論點(diǎn)： 注資改善住房條件——提升——城市的魅力指數(shù)。

論據(jù)： 住房問(wèn)題的解決 ——是——評(píng)價(jià)城市魅力的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一。

例證： 以北京為例，大部分來(lái)北京工作，上學(xué)人，因?yàn)闆](méi)有自己的住房，而缺乏對(duì)于城市的認(rèn)可以及滿意度，甚至，缺乏安全感以及歸屬感, 更不用說(shuō)城市的吸引力。

結(jié)論：改善住房條件——是城市的吸引力—— 的重要因素。

Injecting funds in improving housing conditions can pull up the glamour index of metropolises and towns. In other words, the settlement of housing issues is one of the criteria to value charm in a city. For instance, in Beijing, the majority of people without houses tend to lack recognition of and satisfaction to the city，without any sense of security and belonging, let alone being attracted by it. Hence，improved housing conditions can be a vital factor to appeal.

第三段： 論點(diǎn)+論據(jù)+例證+結(jié)論

論點(diǎn)：投資增加就業(yè)，學(xué)習(xí)機(jī)會(huì)——是——城市吸引力另一種方式。

論據(jù): 很多人涌入城市——由于—— 城市中的實(shí)現(xiàn)價(jià)值發(fā)揮才能的機(jī)會(huì)。

例證： 政府應(yīng)在大城市建立了更多的高校，為人們提供了更好的學(xué)習(xí)資源。此外，政府招商引資的方式，在城市中引進(jìn)更過(guò)多的企業(yè)，提供了人們提供大量的工作機(jī)會(huì)。

結(jié)論：寬廣平臺(tái)的構(gòu)建——是——城市吸引人們的關(guān)鍵。

To invest in increasing employment and learning opportunities is another way to gain charm. Conspicuously, a growing number of people flooding into conurbations is due to the fact that they have opportunities there to realize their own values and become capable. For example, the government established more colleges and universities in big cities to provide better learning resources. Besides, introduction of more substantial enterprises by the way of investment incentives has furnished a mass of employment chances. Hence, construction of a broadened platform is the key to attracting people.

第四段：

讓步段：另一種觀點(diǎn)合理性+however+對(duì)此觀點(diǎn)反駁

另一種觀點(diǎn)合理性：

錢花在公共場(chǎng)所藝術(shù)品上有其合理性 1 增添城市的人文氣息 2 改善區(qū)域面貌

反駁觀點(diǎn)：

錢應(yīng)用于解決城市中所存在的基本問(wèn)題——增強(qiáng)其吸引力，因?yàn)? 基于人們的生存發(fā)展的實(shí)際需求 2 城市的自身發(fā)展。

Spending money on works of art in public places has its own rationality, which is conducive to adding a humanistic flavor and improving the display of a region. However, funds should be utilized on subsistent essential issues to heighten the appeal of the region, in view of actual demands of people for survival and development as well as urban development and growth.

第五段：總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)+提出建議

總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)：改善住房條件+機(jī)會(huì)的增加——提升城市吸引力——根本所在

提出建議： 各國(guó)政府——建立相關(guān)的體制——增加公共場(chǎng)所的藝術(shù)氣息

In brief, improvement of housing conditions and addition of opportunities are fundamental to those regions’ appeal. Meanwhile, the government should also establish relative system to add an artistic atmosphere in public places.