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6、兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句之間缺乏連詞

如果用逗號(hào)連接兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，那句子之間必須有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，不能只用逗號(hào)來(lái)連接。

例12：Many Chinese students are good at their studies, they don’t have much social experience.

評(píng)析：逗號(hào)連接的是兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的含有主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，兩個(gè)句子之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，必須加上表轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞(如but)，不能只用逗號(hào)連接。

更正：Many Chinese students are good at their studies, but they don’t have much social experience.

例13：I am a boy, I am strong.

評(píng)析：I am a boy和I am strong是兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，中間可以加連詞，可以用分號(hào)，可以寫成兩句話，或是把其中一句改為非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，但是不能只用逗號(hào)連接。

更正1：I am a boy, and I am strong.

更正2：I am a boy; I am strong.

更正3：I am a boy. I am strong.

更正4：Being a boy, I am strong.

7、從句獨(dú)立成句

從句必須依附于主句而存在，單獨(dú)一個(gè)連詞引導(dǎo)的從句不能用句點(diǎn)和主句隔開(kāi)而獨(dú)立成句。

例14：It is more helpful for children to make mistakes and learn from their own mistakes. Because making mistakes sometimes is the best way to avoid more mistakes and to cultivate some valuable characters.

評(píng)析：Because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句不能單獨(dú)成句，必須依附于主句而存在。可以把兩句話連成一句，或是把原因狀語(yǔ)從句改為以it is because或this is because開(kāi)頭的句子。

更正1：It is more helpful for children to make mistakes and learn from their own mistakes because making mistakes sometimes is the best way to avoid more mistakes and to cultivate some valuable characters.

更正2：It is more helpful for children to make mistakes and learn from their own mistakes. This is because making mistakes sometimes is the best way to avoid more mistakes and to cultivate some valuable characters.

8、詞性誤用

考生在記單詞的時(shí)候容易只記單詞的意思，不注意詞性和用法，導(dǎo)致名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞、副詞之間詞性誤用的情況。這樣的錯(cuò)誤比較嚴(yán)重，應(yīng)該避免。

例15：He worked industrious all day.

評(píng)析：句中的industrious是形容詞，不能修飾動(dòng)詞。形容詞用于修飾名詞，副詞可以修飾動(dòng)詞、形容詞和副詞。

更正：He worked industriously all day.

9、代詞錯(cuò)誤

代詞方面的錯(cuò)誤主要是代詞與其所指代的名詞單復(fù)數(shù)不一致。

例16：As a person, sooner or later, they will meet some problems.

評(píng)析：句中的they作為復(fù)數(shù)代詞與其所指代的名詞person單復(fù)數(shù)不一致，應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式的代詞。

更正：As a person, sooner or later, he or she will meet some problems.

10、介詞后面跟動(dòng)詞原形

介詞后面不能跟動(dòng)詞原形，必須跟名詞或動(dòng)名詞。

例17：People splash water to each other for celebrate their new year.

評(píng)析：介詞for后面不能跟動(dòng)詞原形celebrate，可以改為動(dòng)名詞形式。

更正：People splash water to each other for celebrating their new year.