托福寫作開頭段重要性之錯(cuò)誤解析

我們經(jīng)常說好的開始是成功的一半，但是一個(gè)壞的開頭也能毀掉一篇文章。托福寫作是中國考生的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)，中西文化差異一直困擾著考生，所以在寫作時(shí)要將心中所想用英文表達(dá)出來，一定要注意以下幾個(gè)問題。

過分簡單沒有重點(diǎn)(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆)

典型失敗案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

用詞不當(dāng)，表達(dá)不準(zhǔn) (噴血指數(shù)：☆☆)

典型失敗案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

意思重復(fù)原地踏步(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆

典型失敗案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

中國俗語胡亂翻譯(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆☆)

典型失敗案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

正確說法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”。

觀點(diǎn)武斷 態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬 (噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)

典型失敗案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed。

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

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