雅思作文凸顯個性化更容易獲高分

雅思作文凸顯個性化更容易獲高分，在千篇一律的說理式文章中顯得更為出眾，給考官留下好的印象，雅思寫作個性化表達(dá)很有必要從語言說上比較具體，考生在語言組織方面也會輕松很多。那么如何進(jìn)行雅思寫作個性化表達(dá)呢?本文將從議論文的引言段、主體段和結(jié)尾段出發(fā)，分析一些具有個性化思路的范文，并總結(jié)一些議論文個性化表達(dá)的方案。

雅思寫作個性化表達(dá)一，引言段部分的個性化表達(dá)：

一個好的引言段對議論文的作用不言而喻，比較常規(guī)的寫法是在引言段的開始對議論文的話題作背景陳述，通常是大致介紹考題中所涉及的事物或行為在當(dāng)今社會的總體情況或特征。這種寫作方式中規(guī)中矩，但很難表現(xiàn)出個性化色彩。導(dǎo)致很多文章總是在用“Nowadays…”、“With the development of…”等千篇一律的套句。而個性化的表達(dá)可以使文章的背景介紹與自己的親身經(jīng)歷相結(jié)合，使文章變得更為鮮活，開頭段便顯得與眾不同，引起考官的注意。下面來看一個例子： People in the modern world are enjoying greater wealth but they are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons­ Suggest some measures to solve this problem.

個性化引言段

I keep on nodding in agreement when seeing the background information of the question. I myself have always been struggling not to be overweight. Unfortunately, like most others, I failed. As to why people nowadays are not as fit and active as they were, various factors can be identified.

雅思寫作個性化表達(dá)二，主體段(理由段)中的個性化表達(dá)：

主體段(理由段)是比較難以進(jìn)行個性化表達(dá)的部分，或者說在理由段進(jìn)行個性化表達(dá)要特別注意“分寸”，因?yàn)槿绻�理由段中的個性化表達(dá)過多，則會造成前文所說到的降低文章論據(jù)“普遍實(shí)用性”和說服力的結(jié)果。那么如何達(dá)到個性化和說服力的平衡性呢?我們可以先看幾段文字：

Tele-education has been playing an increasingly significant role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree­

個性化理由段-討論telecommunication的優(yōu)點(diǎn)

In classrooms across most parts of the developed world you will see an array of telecommunications equipment from TVs to computers. This technology allows students greater contact with the outside……I remember attending a small rural primary school, but watching the landing of people on the moon.

Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema. Do you agree or disagree with this view­

個性化理由段-討論interest in going to the cinema

However, the cinemas in my home country are still full every weekend and when a new film is released we are all keen to go and watch it. In fact, many small cinemas have been rebuilt and we can now go to large centres that have six or eight cinema screens and show up to ten different films a night. An evening out at the cinema is fun and some films, particularly horror and science fiction films, are much better on the big screen.

There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music­ Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays­ 推薦閱讀：

個性化理由段-討論international music重要性

However, there is one reason why international music may be more important, and that is since it is widely liked internationally, it helps unite the world. I noticed this in Korea, when I saw young Korean boys dancing in unison to modern rock music. The traditional Korean music is often too difficult, high toned and not relevant to the lives of younger people.

在第一段話種，作者結(jié)合自己童年在學(xué)校看登月直播的經(jīng)歷說明“tele-education”的好處。在第二段話中，作者結(jié)合自己國家的電影市場情況說，說明人們還是有興趣去電影院看電影的;在第三段話中，作者結(jié)合自己去韓國旅游的所見所聞證明了國際音樂的重要性。可以看出，這兩個主體段的理由陳述都是和個人經(jīng)歷相結(jié)合的，所以文章顯得很有個性化，但卻完全不失辯論力度。這樣的理由段寫作方法也是值得教學(xué)中讓學(xué)生體會和嘗試的。

雅思寫作個性化表達(dá)三，結(jié)尾段中的個性化表達(dá)：

在議論文寫作中，結(jié)尾段通常是觀點(diǎn)的重申。很多學(xué)生因?yàn)楸磉_(dá)方式的缺乏，會覺得重述觀點(diǎn)是一件比較困難的事，因此文章匆忙結(jié)尾。而適當(dāng)加入個性化的思路表達(dá)，可以使文章的結(jié)尾變得更加生動。比如下面這段結(jié)尾：People in the modern world are enjoying greater wealth but they are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons­ Suggest some measures to solve this problem.

結(jié)尾段強(qiáng)調(diào)保持健康的重要性：

I believe that all of us can imagine the daring consequences of living a life without a sound body. Therefore I decide to walk home instead of taking a taxi.

再比如說這個G類的題目：

Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion­

結(jié)尾段再次重申應(yīng)該換職業(yè)：

I’ve had five jobs in the past fifteen years, but all in the same industry. Therefore, I’m always ready to take a brand-new career path. Or I’ll regret it later that I never try something different even once in my life. I believe the best is yet to come.

總而言之，雅思寫作個性化表達(dá)可以出現(xiàn)在文章的引言段、主體段和結(jié)尾段，這些個性化的文字與傳統(tǒng)說理辯論式語言一樣，都能夠達(dá)到清晰地提出或證明觀點(diǎn)的目的。巧妙地使用這些個性化的語言和思路，可以使文章的辯論變得“平易近人”且別具一格。

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1.加拿大直接申請名校本科難度比較大，學(xué)校注重學(xué)生的高中成績、英語成績和整體的申請材料。通過精心的材料準(zhǔn)備，以突出學(xué)生綜合的素質(zhì)，曾經(jīng)幫助一名高考二本線的學(xué)生申請到英屬哥倫比亞大學(xué)（加拿大TOP2）。　 2.葛同學(xué)，南京一中高三學(xué)生。學(xué)生成績不錯，�？蓟�本都在本一以上，因不滿國內(nèi)教育制度想出國深造。通過詳細(xì)的交流，挖掘了學(xué)生很多亮點(diǎn)，最終成功拿到多倫多大學(xué)（加拿大TOP3）和英屬哥倫比亞大學(xué)（加拿大TOP2）的錄取通知書。　　 3.楊同學(xué)，南京航空航天大學(xué)，GPA82，雅思6.5/6.0，在校期間參加過學(xué)校的科研項(xiàng)目并獲得過一些獎項(xiàng)，假期的社會實(shí)踐較為豐富，最終成功申請到滑鐵盧大學(xué)的EE專業(yè)碩士。　　 4.周同學(xué)，南京三江學(xué)院建筑設(shè)計專業(yè)，GPA83，雅思6.0。學(xué)生有很多的設(shè)計作品，也在自己家的公司實(shí)習(xí)過。成功申請到了澳洲墨爾本大學(xué)（澳洲TOP1）和悉尼大學(xué)（TOP3）的建筑專業(yè)碩士。