雅思寫作評分標準的深度解讀——寫作6分的秘訣

標準1：TR (T ask Response)

常見錯誤1：沒有回答所有問題
例1:：Many people have chosen to move from rural areas to cities. Why has this happened? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

例2：Some people argue that it is important to ban advertisements aimed at children. Some people think advertising gives parents useful information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

常見錯誤2：忽視題目重心
例1：Fast food restaurants have increased around the world. Some people argue that it has a negative effect on both families and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

例2：Some people argue that unpaid community service should be added to high schools, because it is as important as academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

常見錯誤3：忽視對比和比較
例：The government should spend money on public facilities rather than support artistic projects or artists. Do you agree or disagree?

常見錯誤4：論述中不斷重復一個觀點，不加以解釋和論述
例: It is argued that parents play a larger part in children's development than schools, especially for preschool fit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

學生的論述段落 : Parents are important in shaping children's perception of the world. It is clear that many children's behaviour and ideas are affected by parents. If parents do not behave well, their behaviour can have a negative effect on children. This will affect children's success in adulthood.

常見錯誤5：段落中間有很多觀點，但是沒有進行分類和逐個論述。
例1：The Olympics can create a lot of economic benefits and also benefit people’s health. People can practise sports every day. They can earn more money because of job opportunities. With physical fitness, they can perform their job very well. Their income will also increase, good for the whole country.

例2：International travel can yield many benefits. First, it creates revenues and brings jobs. Second, it can connect a country with the rest of the world. Third, local people will be exposed to different ideas and cultures. Fourth, some cultural sites can be well protected.

標準2：CC （Coherence and Cohesion）

常見錯誤1：段落中間沒有明確的中心句,論述過程沒有明確的中心思想。

例：Children are too young to distinguish right from wrong. They watch television every day and do not study. They drop out of schools or fight with their peers. It is true that television viewing Is not good for children.

常見錯誤2：連接詞過多使用，使用錯誤或者使用不恰當。
例：It is undeniable that the government should spend money on art. This is because the government has a lot of money. Obviously, art is important to our fife. However, other things cannot be as important as art to us. It comes as no surprise that many countries in the world have spent a lot of money on art.

常見錯誤3：使用冗長的套句
例：Education has become one of the most controversial issues around the world while many people have a hard time reaching a consensus on the importance of moral education.

常見錯誤4：代詞使用不正確
例1：They should pay more attention to education. Parents can spend more time playing with children, and they will feel happier and can lead a fulfilling life. A child who has a happy life can improve his behavior at school.

例2：Children today are spoilt in material ways by their parents. They may not know what matters most in their lives.

常見錯誤5：段落要么太長(6-7句話），要么太短(2-3句話)，或者分段的地方不對。
例Individuals and businesses should pay for the clean-up of pollution. If individuals are not held responsible for their behaviour, they will continue to pollute the environment. The government's spending can improve the environment, but it sooner or later runs out oil money. If companies are required to pay for pollution reduction methods, they will be more careful about their behaviour.
In addition, if companies and individuals do not bear any cost, they do not have motivation to be environmentally friendly.

標準3： LR （Lexical Resource）

常見錯誤1：誤解單詞的詞性
例：The crime rate will arise continuously.

常見錯誤2：單詞的使用錯
例：Advertising is a good way to propagandise products.

常見錯誤3：單詞的搭配錯誤
例：The government should improve citizens' awareness

常見錯誤4：用詞重復
Working at home is useful for employees. They can manage their time flexibly if they are allowed to work at home. Working at home is particularly important for those who cannot work on a full-time basis.

標準4：GRA  (Grammatical Range and Accuracy)

常見錯誤：單句太多
例：Advertising is important. It allows people to get information about products. They can make better decisions. This can save money and improve efficiency.

常見錯誤2：句子沒有連詞，或者成分殘缺
例：Many parents are too busy today, therefore, they do not communicate with children very often.

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