嘮嘮托福作文的二三注意事項 高分模板絕對要準(zhǔn)備

托福寫作有個模板備用很重要。尤其在開頭段，結(jié)尾段以及中間各段的銜接，找到了漂亮的句式就從此永遠(yuǎn)用這個不要再改了，這就是自己獨家的寫作模板。每段的第一句尤其要精彩一點，試著嘗試倒裝句，或用被動語態(tài)，總之別寫干巴巴的簡單句、主動句，這樣給考官的感覺就是你接下來的論述也沒有可期待之處。

例子不在于多而在于精，舉出來之后要充分挖掘它的內(nèi)涵，別停留在就事論事上，可以試著延伸到和生活、和自己緊密相聯(lián)的點上，這才是體現(xiàn)寫作水平的地方。不過如果論述是弱項的話，那還是多舉一些具體例子然后把每一個都說幾句，那樣可以揚(yáng)長避短，在字?jǐn)?shù)上也不會吃虧，拿到一個比較好的分?jǐn)?shù)還是很有希望的。

平時托福寫作備考中練習(xí)的時候，可以用盡量多的句式，多嘗試，找到適合自己的，既能記住，又能靈活運(yùn)用，限時模考的時候就開始逐漸找到自己的句式表達(dá)和段落結(jié)構(gòu)，形成自己固定的模板套路，也就是個人的托福寫作風(fēng)格。

這里為大家推薦一篇美國人地道的托福獨立寫作作為參考。

【佳作賞析】

Topic 3 Has the easiness of cooking improved life？

People work hard to fulfill their principal necessities， and food is the one thing that is really important to their survival. Although sometimes belied by other things that seem important， food is the core objective that drives all people to work. But the outcome of the efforts of these people is not a direct supply of food； rather it is in the form of money. Thus these people use the money they obtain to prepare their food.

In old days， preparing food was cumbersome and timeconsuming work for those who do it solely for eating purposes. This kind of preparing food in due tie could not comply with the kind of life people lead today. The use of technological advancement makes preparing food practical even for the clumsiest person. This helps a great deal for those who work against time to make their living. It also avoids the waste of considerable amount of money from hiring a cook.

The development in the preparation of food is highly effective for those people who have no know how of it. A person who does not know how to prepare his/her own food would go to a restaurant or some other place where food is served everyday. But with the advanced food preservation technology， now he is free， completely independent of restaurants and other places. He can prepare his own food and enjoy the feeling of "home， sweet home".

For people at work， life has just become easy for them. They will not have to worry all day long about what they are going to prepare for their supper. They can fully concentrate on their jobs， and work with a mind full of peace. In general this new way of preparing food has helped those who are concerned about their daily meals -- almost everyone. Not only that， it would enlighten those who are frustrated with their jobs just because of the worry of that tiresome work -- preparing food.