2013年8月29日雅思作文范文

小作文：the graph below shows the value in Australian dollar of Australian trade with three countries in 2004 - 2009.

寫作策略：主體部分三段。每段寫趨勢和進(jìn)出口對比。最后結(jié)論寫三個國家的差異。

大作文：Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

positive

negative

1 解放人力

2 提高效率

1 失業(yè)率,貧富差距

2 人類對機器的依賴

3 道德問題

Computer technology is advancing dramatically since its invention and has shown some possibility of intelligence, which means (that) they are capable to think, and therefore make judgment and initiate action in complex situation, featuring like human brains. This excites many people while arousing some concern about its hidden hazard to human being. (定語從句，賓語從句，非謂語，)

Of course those optimists have their own reasons. The first one is that intelligent computers would free human labor to an enormous extent. They would replace human workers in many walks of life, performing many tasks in medical procedure, manufacture, domestic service, space and ocean exploration and so on. They can work more efficiently, accurately than human counterparts and they never feel tired or fear any danger. It is claimed that these advantages would increase the productivity of the whole world for long run and bring human comfort and convenience. (表語從句，非謂語，比較句型，并列句，形式主語)

However it also makes sense to worry about the potential risk that computational intelligence may impose on human race. It is generally believed that employment rate would decline if artificial intelligent machines are widely applied to substitute for human labors. Correspondingly, the wealth gap can be inferred wider. In addition to economic impact, human community may increase dependence on smart technology, losing some basic living skills or life experience. Some pessimists show their concern about ethical issue in literature involving robots which are likely to manipulate humans. Nonetheless, many people hold the belief that no matter how intelligent a computer is, it is programed by human being and is under human’s control for sure. (形式主語，被動句，定語從句，條件狀語從句，非謂語，同位語從句，讓步狀語從句)

Based on the discussion above, I personally think that whether advanced technology can benefit human race or not is determined by how we human utilize it. Technology is supposed to be neutral and has no threat on human designers. If we put it to good use, then we would make the most of technology. (非謂語，賓語從句，主語從句，被動句，條件狀語從句)

詞匯拓展

1. Intelligence 智力

2. invention 發(fā)明

3. make judgment 做出判斷

4. initiate action發(fā)起行動

5. feature 以…為特征

6. hazard 潛在危險

7. optimist 樂觀主義者

8. pessimist 悲觀主義者

9. free v. 解放

10. walks of life 生活很多領(lǐng)域

11. perform many tasks 干活

12. medical procedure手術(shù)

13. manufacture 制造

14. domestic service 家庭服務(wù)

15. accurately 準(zhǔn)確地

16. make the most of 充分利用

17. makes sense 有道理

18. impose 施加

19. artificial intelligent machine 人工智能機器

20. apply 應(yīng)用

21. substitute for 替代

22. Correspondingly 因此

23. wealth gap 貧富差距

24. infer 推斷

25. ethical 道德的

26. literature 文學(xué)作品

27. involve 涉及

28. manipulate 操控

29. Nonetheless 盡管如此

30. Program 編程

31. under control 在掌控之中

32. Based on 基于

33. is determined by 取決于

34. utilize 利用

35. is supposed 本應(yīng)該

36. put it to good use 好好利用

37. counterpart 對應(yīng)部分