雅思寫作的多樣化句式手段

雅思寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)變?yōu)椋篢R，CC，GRA和LR后，評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)細(xì)化，具體化，從而對(duì)英語語言基本功的考查力度加大。 筆者現(xiàn)將在課堂上講的多樣化句式的一部分內(nèi)容拿出來跟讀者共享。

句子開頭的變化的手段：

A Begin sentence with an appositive

The forest ranger， an expert in forest fire control，talked to the campers about safety in the woods.

An expert in forest fire control，the forest ranger talked to the campers about safety in the woods.

the country‘s biggest cellular operator，China Mobile is looking at tighter controls on Internet-related service providers， industry insiders say.

B Begin a sentence with an adverb  

The fog was slowly settling down.

Slowly the fog was settling down.

Obviously enough， he himself can not handle the trouble by himself.

C Begin a sentence with an adjective or adjective phrase

Mr Boyd was very angry and began to defend his reputation with strong arguments.

Angry， Mr Boyd began to defend his reputation with strong argument.

Tired and frustrated， the teacher went home to have a rest.

D Begin sentences with participle phrases

I jogged very day and increased my energy level.

Jogging every day， I soon increased my energy level.

Tim was troubled by a dream and he woke up with a start.

Troubled by a dream， Tim woke up with a start.

Witnessed by Chinese Premier Wen Jiabao and leaders of the 10-mem ber ASEAN， Chinese Minister of Commerce Bo Xilai signed the agreement with 10 economic ministers of the ASEAN countries.

E Begin sentences with an infinitive phrase

You must attend every class to succeed in a course.

To succeed in a course， you must attend every class.

F　Begin sentences with a prepositional phrase

Madame Curie was an industrious worker in the scientific laboratory.

In the scientific laboratory， Madame Curie was an industrious worker.

Under a new scheme， established SPs can become pure content providers and China Mobile may seek a bigger portion of the shared revenues.

In the short term， operators will not abandon SPs.

For China Mobile， a dramatic change in its partnership scheme may be harmful.

G Begin sentences with clause modifiers

He did not want to rewrite the paper because he was tired and hungry and discouraged.

Because he was tired and hungry and discouraged， he did not want to rewrite the paper.

You may regret in leisure what you impulsively do in haste.

What you impulsively do in haste you may regret in leisure.

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王同學(xué)，屬于基礎(chǔ)較好的高三學(xué)生。上培訓(xùn)課前將劍橋8做過兩遍，但是正確率沒有明顯進(jìn)步。通過和學(xué)生的多次交談和溝通，發(fā)現(xiàn)他在做題之后僅僅對(duì)了答案，并沒有深入剖析做題錯(cuò)誤的根源：段落細(xì)節(jié)配對(duì)題正確率很低，他總是會(huì)錯(cuò)過關(guān)鍵信息而找不到答案。于是我們把上課重點(diǎn)放在同義轉(zhuǎn)換歸類上。不僅僅是同義詞、反義詞之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，還有對(duì)于某個(gè)信息可能出現(xiàn)的句子形式也需要brainstorming練習(xí)。通過一個(gè)多月的輔導(dǎo)和練習(xí)，該同學(xué)參加雅思考試最終閱讀考了9分的高分。