雅思考試寫(xiě)作試題及解答方式解析

文章中主要針對(duì)雅思考試寫(xiě)作試題及解答方式給各位考生做了必要的說(shuō)明，小編只是想要通過(guò)這種方式更有效的幫助到大家，同時(shí)小編也祝愿大家能夠在考試中取得優(yōu)異的成績(jī)。

第一段：開(kāi)頭段-補(bǔ)充背景，轉(zhuǎn)述話題

一方：政府需要提供financial support

1、 政府有職責(zé)服務(wù)公眾，特別老年人這一類(lèi)的“弱勢(shì)群體”

2、 老年人對(duì)于社會(huì)有貢獻(xiàn)，理應(yīng)獲得相應(yīng)的“回報(bào)”    

另一方：個(gè)人需要有積蓄

1、 政府的幫助對(duì)象太多，可能負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重，個(gè)人應(yīng)當(dāng)有所分擔(dān)

2、 個(gè)人一定的積蓄可以降低風(fēng)險(xiǎn)，而不至于完全依賴于社會(huì)

3、 可以幫助個(gè)人形成一定程度上的節(jié)儉

結(jié)尾立場(chǎng)：兩者都需要，priority可以視不同類(lèi)型的國(guó)家而定     推薦閱讀：新浪五星金牌名師獨(dú)家學(xué)習(xí)資料 免費(fèi)下載

參考范文：

Majority of human beings have been blessed by the peace and prosperityafter Second World War which in turn has brought about the booming ofpopulation. Not only has the number of people been rising dramatically, life expectancyin most countries has also witnessed noticeable increases. That, however, poses dire challenge of how tosupport the aging population.

Those who call for financial support from state or municipal government harbor the perception that “government by the people should indeed serve the people”， especially disadvantaged ones like the elderly. Education for the children and employment opportunities for the young are among statesmen’s top priorities, yet equally important is the need of the senior ones who appear comparatively senile now but may have devoted all their life to the society, be it agriculture and industrial production or the making of policies or laws.

Opponents, in contrast, are concerned about whether the huge number of elderly people might have become “unbearable heaviness” for the whole society. Pension for an increasing number of retired workers could amount to astronomical figures, which is unlikely to be alleviated in the future due to the fact that many now will keep drawing the pension for more than twenty years. Besides, the fund spent on areas like constructing nursing houses for lonely aged people could add to the burden. Under such circumstances, individuals should take part of the responsibility by saving a certain proportion of their income before retirement or trying to stay in their position slightly longer if their health permits.

Personally, I would say government and individuals are never independent of each other, so confronting the challenging of an aging society calls for efforts from both sides. However, the priority might differ in various countries: while the developing countries need to invest more on improving the pension or overall welfare system, individuals who are enjoying the benefits in developed countries should try to save money for themselves so as to share the pressure of their governments.

詞匯拓展：

Pension 養(yǎng)老金

Nursing houses 養(yǎng)老院

Booming of population 人口增長(zhǎng)

welfare system 福利體系

peace and prosperity 和平與繁榮

municipal government 市政府

disadvantaged people 弱勢(shì)群體

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【成功案例】
王同學(xué)，屬于基礎(chǔ)較好的高三學(xué)生。上培訓(xùn)課前將劍橋8做過(guò)兩遍，但是正確率沒(méi)有明顯進(jìn)步。通過(guò)和學(xué)生的多次交談和溝通，發(fā)現(xiàn)他在做題之后僅僅對(duì)了答案，并沒(méi)有深入剖析做題錯(cuò)誤的根源：段落細(xì)節(jié)配對(duì)題正確率很低，他總是會(huì)錯(cuò)過(guò)關(guān)鍵信息而找不到答案。于是我們把上課重點(diǎn)放在同義轉(zhuǎn)換歸類(lèi)上。不僅僅是同義詞、反義詞之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，還有對(duì)于某個(gè)信息可能出現(xiàn)的句子形式也需要brainstorming練習(xí)。通過(guò)一個(gè)多月的輔導(dǎo)和練習(xí)，該同學(xué)參加雅思考試最終閱讀考了9分的高分。