2013年2月25日GMAT寫作考試回憶

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【原始】

作文:manager of department store的建議

一個local clothing store的profit在今年五月到八月一直再下降，而一個賣furnishing的store的profit一直在上升，所以manager就說有個trend：consumer 要買更多的家具，所以公司就要把以前賣衣服的都換成賣家具的。。。。

【考古】黃金80題72

The following appeared as part of a recommendation from the business manager of a department store.

“Local clothing stores reported that their profits decreased, on average, for the three-month period between August 1 and October 31. Stores that sell products for the home reported that, on average, their profits increased during this same period. Clearly, consumers are choosing to buy products for their homes instead of clothing. To take advantage of this trend, we should reduce the size of our clothing departments and enlarge our home furnishings and household products departments.”

專賣店的商務(wù)經(jīng)理的備忘錄：

本地服裝店報告說從8月1號到10月31號的3個月里他們的平均利潤下降。銷售家庭用品的商店卻報告同期的平均利潤上升。很明顯，顧客正選擇為他們的家里購買用品而不是買衣物。為了利用這個趨勢，我們應(yīng)該縮減我們的服裝部規(guī)模而擴大家庭裝飾和家務(wù)用品部

【參考思路】

1、A period of three month is too short to draw a general conclusion of the overall trend.

2、The past three months' trend does not guarantee the same in the future.

3、Whether the reports from the local clothing stores and stores that sell products for the home are reliable or not are still open to doubt, thus making the author's suggestion groundless.

4、降低和上升，是否存在必然的關(guān)系。忽略他因。

5、三個月的時間是否能說明一種趨勢?

【參考范文】

Based upon sales reports over a three-month period that indicate an increase in profits for stores that sell products for the home and a decrease in profits for clothing stores, the business manager of a department store concludes that consumers are choosing to purchase home furnishings rather than clothing. On the basis of this conclusion, the manager recommends a reduction in the size of the clothing department and an increase in the size of the home-furnishings department. This recommendation is problematic in two critical respects.

In the first place, the author’s conclusion that consumers are choosing to buy products for their homes instead of clothing is based upon too small a sample. Data gathered from a three-month period is insufficient to establish the conclusion drawn from it. It is quite possible that the three-month period chosen is idiosyncratic and not representative of entire year’s sales. If so, reducing the size of the clothing departments and enlarging the home-furnishings departments may be a costly mistake.

In the second place, the data collected during the three month period may be biased. The fact that the data reflects sales in local stores is cause for concern. It is possible that the sales trend in a particular location is not representative of sales in other regions. For example, sales of clothing in Florida during the winter months are likely to be quite different from sales of clothing in Alaska during the same period.

In conclusion, this argument is not persuasive as it stands. A more convincing argument must provide additional sales data, collected at different periods of the year and at different locations, that substantiates the trend in question.

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