雅思考官黃金示范 8分口語是如何煉成的

在第二部分中，考生必須要進行兩分鐘的陳述�？脊倏赡茉趦煞昼娍煲�結(jié)束時以一個過渡性問題來打斷你，但你必須具備說兩分鐘的語言能力。換句話說，在這一部分中，流暢度和想象力是考查的重點。一些考生沒有足夠的觀點和能力來維持兩分鐘的表達，這就意味著他們會在流暢度方面失分。
       另外，雖然一些考生可以說足兩分鐘，卻無法連貫地表達出一條清晰的理由或原因。而最常見的情況就是文不對題！比如說，要表述的話題是“描述一個你認為可以讓世界變得更好的工作”，但考生卻不停地說他有多么喜歡籃球；或者話題是“描述一個你將來想去的地方”，考生卻談及自己去年去海南的經(jīng)歷。
       除此之外，如果考生沒有組織好語言、讓聽者無法理解，也會失分。
       以“電影”這一話題為例，如果想有好的表現(xiàn)，那么流暢的表達就至關重要。要做到流暢，你需要有足夠多的詞匯和觀點，而且還要努力避免卡殼，比如你在腦海中尋找合適詞匯時所出現(xiàn)的停頓。
      下面就來看看考官會如何作答吧！

題目：拯救大兵瑞恩 Saving Private Ryan

Well, actually1,the kind of films I like best are probably2 the older ones. For example3, oneof my favourites is Saving Private Ryan. I think I like war movies and I particularlylike that one, I suppose4 because5 the acting is excellent with Tom Hanks6 anda bunch of other people who are really really good. It’s a good story but Isuppose the thing that is most impressive for me is that initial opening scenewhere the troops are actually landing in Normandyon the beaches. It’s very meaningful for me because my dad was in the SecondWorld War and also because I visited those beaches in Normandy7. It’s easy forme, having been there8, to imagine what those guys were actually facing as theycame off the landing craft and had to face a hail of bullets from the Germanmachine gun posts. And I think the other reason I really like that film isbecause it represents Americawhen America was great, whenAmericawas at its best. Around the time of the Second World War, I think America was abeacon (燈塔) for many countries.It seemed to be freer, and more powerful, more hopeful, more optimistic as well as gutsy9 (勇敢的). Itseemed to offer more pleasure for human beings as a nation and to be less clutteredup by old traditions that weren’t very useful any more. So I think that’s oneof the reasons I really like that film10 because it represents the best of theUS whereas now I guess the US is a bit more in decline。

學習要點：

1. 控制好說話的節(jié)奏，給自己留出思考的時間；

2. 使用副詞可以增加表達的準確度，所以不要吝嗇使用；

3. for example 就像一個符號，標志著你的表述即將進入具體直觀的部分；

4. 用I suppose 代替了I think。平心而論，后者我們已經(jīng)用得太多了；

5. “因為……所以……”是表現(xiàn)思想邏輯的最基本形式；

6. 如果能夠熟練說出幾個外國名人的名字，就能給考官留下一個更好的印象，也使得你的回答更具有個人特色和可信度；

7. 將話題與個人經(jīng)歷聯(lián)系起來，增加了真實性和故事性；

8. 分詞短語作插入語，使得語言的節(jié)奏感和靈活性躍然紙上，希望你能重點模仿！

9. 通過這種排比式的強調(diào)，既可以使語言更有說服力，又可以展現(xiàn)豐富的詞匯；

10. 回答要有頭有尾！不必進行過多描述，但保證完整性是有效交流的必要原則。