托福寫作難以突破？這些“套路”先來了解一下！

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好多同學(xué)在寫托福寫作的時(shí)候都沒有辦法突破23分，這讓許多同學(xué)撓破了腦袋。實(shí)際上，托福獨(dú)立寫作是有“套路”滴哦~~！！

好多同學(xué)在寫托福寫作的時(shí)候都沒有辦法突破23分，這讓許多同學(xué)撓破了腦袋。

實(shí)際上，托福獨(dú)立寫作是有“套路”滴哦~~��！

1.語法

語法的問題大多數(shù)學(xué)生都有，所以改動(dòng)起來十分困難。那么我一般情況之下就是和學(xué)生規(guī)定好句型，往里面套詞即可。比如TOPIC SENTENCE，很多同學(xué)都會(huì)寫成 sb. can do sth.的形式。

例如這一道題：In modern times, grandparents cannot give their grandchildren useful advice because the world of today and the world of 50 years ago are too different.

好多同學(xué)都會(huì)選擇哎有用的！還是有用的（因?yàn)橛杏帽容^好寫嘛！�。。┠敲碩OPIC SENTENCE就會(huì)給自己很大的壓力，可能會(huì)這么寫：grandparents can give their grandchildren some useful advice because they are more experienced and intelligent to help them develop a bright career in the future.

兄弟，寫這么長(zhǎng)就GG了�。。�！因?yàn)門OPIC SENTENCE是表達(dá)自己的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的，所以一定要簡(jiǎn)潔�。。。。】靵砜纯次以趺磳懙泥唬�

TS1: To begin with, accepting advice from grandparents is beneficial to improve well-rounded abilities.

TS2: In addition, absorbing grandparents’ advice is conducive to the contribution of individuals’ interpersonal skills.

因?yàn)閷懽魇切枰泄?jié)奏感的，一味的長(zhǎng)句子堆砌不僅僅容易出錯(cuò)，還會(huì)判定長(zhǎng)句過多。簡(jiǎn)而言之，就是寫的太復(fù)雜了讓人讀的累。所以TOPIC SENTENCE只能出現(xiàn)一層關(guān)系，就是我的觀點(diǎn)有好處1. 那么用的句型是什么呢？TS1我一般設(shè)計(jì)成非謂語動(dòng)詞開場(chǎng)，豐富了句型又不會(huì)顯得冗長(zhǎng)拖沓，也避免了“人”做主語所以我用的語法是Doing sth. is beneficial for sb. to do sth. 或者大家也可以用doing sth. allows/stimulates sb. to do sth. 中間的allows和stimulates可以替換成別的動(dòng)詞。

這只是一個(gè)小問題，那么大多數(shù)同學(xué)面臨的問題就是不會(huì)寫句子，寫出來的句子面目全非，令人感到恐慌。怎么辦呢？我一般的解決方法是讓學(xué)生做練習(xí)句型的題目，熟能生巧。會(huì)寫句子了，語法對(duì)了，那問題就小了。因?yàn)槲医棠阌檬裁淳湫湍憔蜁?huì)寫了。托福寫作要求有12種句型，哪一種句型的功能在哪里使用，這個(gè)是同學(xué)們需要注意的。例如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，這個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句啊，是一大法寶（還有另外3個(gè)法寶呢），要怎么用呢？我一般會(huì)要求用在段落的最后一句或者是論據(jù)的一種小結(jié)論的時(shí)候使用。

2.邏輯

邏輯的問題基本上所有的同學(xué)都有。要么填充的論據(jù)證明不了TOPIC SENTENCE，要么例子證明不了論據(jù)。我們來看一個(gè)同學(xué)的實(shí)例：

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藍(lán)色字體的部分是他為了證明自己的TOPIC SENTENCE寫出來的論據(jù)，但是這個(gè)論據(jù)就是換個(gè)說法把TOPIC SENTENCE重復(fù)了一下，簡(jiǎn)稱paraphrasing。大部分的同學(xué)都不會(huì)reasoning，怎么辦呢？那就想辦法。反正我就是為了擴(kuò)充字?jǐn)?shù)嘛！那擴(kuò)充字?jǐn)?shù)也要有理有據(jù)對(duì)不對(duì)？那我們就設(shè)計(jì)出來一個(gè)問題，再用我的觀點(diǎn)解決這個(gè)問題，然后詳細(xì)描述解決的過程就可以了。這樣的話就能寫到90-120個(gè)字左右了。不信我們?cè)囋嚳矗?/p>

It is widely acknowledged that employees are easily get tired and wandering in mind at work due to the heavy workloads, which causes them to lower the work efficiency sometimes. In this situation, only by requiring them to have a face-to-face communication on a certain subject can they supervise and encourage each other to a large extent. In detail, engaged in the group discussion, people are more likely to express their opinions and ideas actively for the reason that every single one in the discussion has to be concentrated on communicating so as to achieve a better result of a specific project.

如果按照這樣的方法，那加上TOPIC SENTENCE已經(jīng)有100-130左右的字?jǐn)?shù)了！湊字?jǐn)?shù)環(huán)節(jié)已經(jīng)完成！可喜可賀！并且想起來這個(gè)邏輯鏈也不累，美哉美哉。

3.例子

很多同學(xué)都認(rèn)為托福寫作要寫例子，我不置可否。硬要說的話是要有例子，但是例子不是細(xì)節(jié)。那么怎么寫好一個(gè)例子就成了重中之重。在我看來，例子可以分為大中小三個(gè)類型，根據(jù)自己的論據(jù)長(zhǎng)度進(jìn)行任意的匹配。我寫過的最短的例子只有一句話，但是絲毫不影響我的得分。讓我們來看看小例子中例子大例子分別長(zhǎng)什么樣吧！

小例子：

For instance, a student from a small town has to spend two hours for walking to school, while a student from a big city only spend twenty minutes to go to school by bus.

中例子：

For example, students are able to watch some videos, made by super scholars, on Youtube. These videos provide students with experiences of learning and conducive advice of establishing confidence and being well-organized.

大例子：

For example, my father wished to pursue a career as a programmer after he graduated from university twenty years ago. To achieve his goal, he left his hometown, a tranquil county, and worked hard in Beijing to make a living. He was fortunate enough to begin his career in such a big city. Thanks to the experience he gained from high-tech companies, he got promoted to be a manager in an international IT company. Now, he has secured his dream job and lead a happy and abundant life, which would have been impossible to do if he had lived in the small town.

看懂了嗎？小例子可以一句話說明，甚至使用SUCH AS都行。中例子控制在2句話之內(nèi)。大例子就是講故事啦。例子的長(zhǎng)度完全取決于你能想出來多少reasoning的部分。