雅思寫作中分詞和從句的運(yùn)用

寫作中，對于兩個獨(dú)立有相同賓語或主語的句子，可以將其中一個的謂語處理為分詞，組合成一個句子；同時(shí)，大家可以嘗試將多個從句組合起來，表達(dá)更復(fù)雜的意思。>>對雅思寫作有疑問？點(diǎn)擊咨詢

分詞的作用

1、分詞作補(bǔ)充

原句:

Many universities encourage students to do part-time jobs.

許多大學(xué)鼓勵學(xué)生做兼職。

Part-time jobs allow students to put theory into practice.

兼職可以讓學(xué)生結(jié)合實(shí)踐和理論。

優(yōu)化后:

Many universities encourage students to do part-time jobs, allowing them to put theory into practice.

許多大學(xué)鼓勵學(xué)生做兼職工作，這讓他們可以結(jié)合實(shí)踐和理論。

原句:

Roughly similar amounts of people left the UK for financial reasons (10%) and tax purposes (9%).

因?yàn)榻?jīng)濟(jì)(10%)和稅收(9%)原因離開英國的人比例大致相同。

The similarity suggests that the wealthy are apparently finding that Britain asks too much of them.

這種相似性暗示著富人明顯覺得英國對他們索取太多。

優(yōu)化后：

Roughly similar amounts of people left the UK for financial reasons (10%) and tax purposes (9%), suggesting the wealthy are apparently finding that Britain asks too much of them in the way of public investment.

因?yàn)榻?jīng)濟(jì)(10%)和稅收(9%)原因離開英國的人比例大致相同，這暗示著富人明顯覺得英國對他們索取太多。

2、分詞作主語

原句:

It is a privilege for local people to get cheaper accesses to the local tourist attractions.

以更低的價(jià)格進(jìn)入當(dāng)?shù)芈糜尉包c(diǎn)是屬于當(dāng)?shù)厝说奶貦?quán)。

The privilege can give the local people a sense of belonging.

這種特權(quán)讓當(dāng)?shù)厝烁械揭环N歸屬感。

優(yōu)化后:

Having a privilege to get cheaper accesses to the local tourist attractions can give the local people a sense of belonging.

擁有以更低價(jià)格進(jìn)入當(dāng)?shù)芈糜尉包c(diǎn)的特權(quán)，讓當(dāng)?shù)厝烁械揭环N歸屬感。

原句:

People consider that the fund of maintaining the public facilities including the museums and historical sites is contributed by the local tax payers.

人們認(rèn)為維護(hù)包括博物館、歷史景點(diǎn)在內(nèi)的公共設(shè)施的費(fèi)用，來自當(dāng)?shù)丶{稅人。

It is legitimate for the local authority to grant the local people discounts of entrance fees.

當(dāng)?shù)卣�府理所�?yīng)當(dāng)為當(dāng)?shù)厝巳雸鲑M(fèi)打折。

優(yōu)化后:

Considering that the fund of maintaining the public facilities including the museums and historical sites is contributed by the local tax payers, it is legitimate for the local authority to grant the local people discounts of entrance fees.

考慮到維護(hù)包括博物館、歷史景點(diǎn)在內(nèi)的公共設(shè)施的費(fèi)用來自當(dāng)?shù)丶{稅人，當(dāng)?shù)卣�府理所�?yīng)當(dāng)為當(dāng)?shù)厝巳雸鲑M(fèi)打折。

從句的運(yùn)用

1、主語從句+賓語從句

原句:

People yearn for the good old simple days.

人們懷念以前簡單的日子。

This is because the speed of modern technology forces us to speed up our pace of life.

這是因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)代科技的發(fā)展速度迫使我們也要加快生活步伐。

優(yōu)化后:

Probably what makes some people yearn for the good old simple days is that the speed of modern technology forces us to speed up our pace of life.

也許人們懷念以前單純?nèi)兆拥脑�因是現(xiàn)代科技的發(fā)展速度迫使我們也要加快生活步伐。

2、狀語從句+定語從句

原句：

Chinese people tend to choose high speed trains to travel between cities.

中國人傾向選擇高鐵作為城際交通。

High speed trains are faster than shuttles and cheaper than airplanes.

高鐵比巴士快，比飛機(jī)便宜。

優(yōu)化后:

When it comes to traveling between cities, Chinese people tend to choose high speed trains, which are faster than shuttles and cheaper than airplanes.

中國人傾向選擇比巴士快，比飛機(jī)便宜的高鐵作為城際交通方式。

3、狀語從句+賓語從句

原句:

Wherever you go, I will hunt you down.

不管你去到哪里，我都會窮追猛打。

I will hunt you down to get back what you owe me.

我窮追猛打你，拿回你虧欠我的。

優(yōu)化后:

Wherever you go, I will hunt you down to get back what you owe me.

不管你去到哪里，我都會窮追猛打，拿回你虧欠我的。

4、狀語從句+定語從句

原句：

When people are used to being caged, they will end up like parasites.

當(dāng)人們習(xí)慣了被圈養(yǎng)，就會變成像寄生蟲一樣。

People will end up like parasites that are unaware of being shamed.

人們變成像寄生蟲一樣，被欺辱了也不知道。

優(yōu)化后:

When people are used to being caged, they will end up like parasites that are unaware of being shamed.

當(dāng)人們習(xí)慣了被圈養(yǎng)，就會變成像寄生蟲一樣的，被欺辱了也不知道。

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