雅思寫(xiě)作，如何在觀點(diǎn)思路不變的情況下提高語(yǔ)言表達(dá)？

　　以下題為例:

　　An increasing number of students choose to go to another country for their higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it? >>>【出國(guó)留學(xué)考試-立即咨詢(xún)】

　　一、支持觀點(diǎn)

　　1.學(xué)習(xí)異國(guó)文化，促進(jìn)交流

　　“屌絲”版本:We can learn more foreign culture and communicate/talk with others.

　　“高富帥”的版本:Learning more foreign culture and communicating with others is a factor that can never be easily ignored.

　　訣竅：在原句中提煉關(guān)鍵詞：learn foreign culture/ communicate，變成動(dòng)名詞，做新句子的主語(yǔ)。

　　2.鍛煉心智，促進(jìn)成長(zhǎng)，培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立能力

　　“屌絲”版本:You can grow mentally and make progress. You can take care of yourself.

　　“高富帥”的版本:That you can take care of yourself deserves/warrants our attention.

　　訣竅：原句前加that，瞬間變主語(yǔ)從句，一秒鐘拉長(zhǎng)句子。

　　3.開(kāi)拓眼界

　　“屌絲”版本:We can open our eyes. / We can broaden our horizon.

　　“高富帥”的版本:Our horizon can be broadened. >>>【出國(guó)留學(xué)考試-立即咨詢(xún)】

　　訣竅：主動(dòng)變被動(dòng)，客觀正式。

　　4.提升求職競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力

　　“屌絲”版本:We can improve career competitiveness/in the job market.

　　“高富帥”的版本:Improvement of/in career competitiveness is the factor that can never be easily ignored.

　　訣竅：提取關(guān)鍵詞improve，變成抽象名詞。

　　5.文憑含金量更高

　　“屌絲”版本:A foreign diploma is with higher value/The diploma will be more widely recognized.

　　“高富帥”的版本:Wider recognition is the most frequently quoted reason when asked about why they study abroad.

　　訣竅：提取關(guān)鍵詞more widely recognized，變名詞詞性。

　　6.環(huán)境優(yōu)美

　　“屌絲”版本:The environment will be more beautiful. >>>【出國(guó)留學(xué)考試-立即咨詢(xún)】

　　“高富帥”的版本:More beautiful environment is among the many advantages of study abroad.

　　訣竅：提取關(guān)鍵詞environment, beautiful。

　　7.完善的社會(huì)福利

　　“屌絲”版本:They have complete social welfare system/social safety net.

　　“高富帥”的版本:Complete social welfare system can be overseen under no condition.

　　訣竅：提取關(guān)鍵詞complete social welfare system。

　　二、反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)

　　1.孤獨(dú)，寂寞

　　“屌絲”版本:We will feel lonelier.

　　“高富帥”的版本:Loneliness is what plagues the overseas students. >>>【出國(guó)留學(xué)考試-立即咨詢(xún)】

　　訣竅：提取關(guān)鍵詞lonely，變名詞，并用plague引出缺點(diǎn)。

　　2.種族歧視

　　“屌絲”版本:The local people will laugh at us. /racial discrimination

　　“高富帥”的版本:Racial discrimination makes the life of them difficult.

　　訣竅：提取關(guān)鍵詞racial discrimination。

　　3.水土不服

　　“屌絲”版本:We cannot adapt ourselves easily to the new environment physically.

　　“高富帥”的版本:Inhabitability/Being unable to adapt to the new environment makes them suffer.

　　訣竅：提取關(guān)鍵詞cannot adapt，兩種方式變名詞。 >>>【出國(guó)留學(xué)考試-立即咨詢(xún)】

　　4.思鄉(xiāng)

　　“屌絲”版本:We might miss our hometown.

　　“高富帥”的版本:Homesick plagues those who study abroad.

　　訣竅：抽象出關(guān)鍵性名詞homesick。

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