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Coherence and Cohesion(連貫與銜接)是雅思寫(xiě)作的一項(xiàng)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，也是一項(xiàng)學(xué)術(shù)英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作技能。想要讓文章的 Coherence and Cohesion 更加學(xué)術(shù)并滿足評(píng)分要求，有四種方法。

1.use transition signal to link ideas（使用過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)）

2.repeat key nouns（重復(fù)關(guān)鍵名詞）

3.use consistent pronouns（使用一致性指代）

4.arrange your idea in logical order（以邏輯順序安排你的觀點(diǎn)）

這四種方法都可以讓你的文章更加有邏輯和說(shuō)服力，本文主要討論第一種方法，也就是過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)的使用。過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)可以簡(jiǎn)單的概括為：起承轉(zhuǎn)合因果例

起：for a start, to begin with, first and foremost, first, the first reason is that

承： inaddition,additionally,besides,whatismore,inadditionto...,Furthermore,moreover, anotherreasonisthat

轉(zhuǎn)： however,but,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,nevertheless,nonetheless,albeit, although.

合：in conclusion, to sum up, last but not least

因：because, due to, because of, as a result of, result from

果：therefore, thus, hence, so, result in, lead to

例：for example, for instance

文章如果沒(méi)有或缺乏這些過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，那么讀起來(lái)就會(huì)有點(diǎn)斷層的感覺(jué)，比如下文：

Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics. Gold has a lustrous beauty that,is resistant to corrosion. It is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purpose. Gold never needs,to be polished and will remain beautiful forever. A Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today,as the day it was mined twenty-three centuries ago. Gold is useful to industry and science. Gold,has been used in hundreds of industrial applications. The most recent use of gold is in astronauts' suits. Astronauts wear gold-plated heat shields for protection outside the spaceship. Gold is,treasured for its beauty, its utility.

如果添加這些詞語(yǔ)，那么文章整體讀起來(lái)就會(huì)不一樣，我們來(lái)一起看一下。

Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics. First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion. Therefore, it is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purpose. Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever. For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today as the day it was mined twenty-three centuries ago. Another important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science. For many years, it has been used in hundreds of industrial applications. The most recent use of gold is in astronauts' suits. Astronauts wear gold-plated heat shields for protection outside the spaceship. In conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty, but also for its utility.

很多學(xué)生在寫(xiě)文章的時(shí)候，往往會(huì)忘記使用這些過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要，其實(shí)它的用處很大，通過(guò)以上兩篇文章的對(duì)比，相信肯定會(huì)有不一樣的感觸。

Coherence and Cohesion(連貫與銜接)是雅思寫(xiě)作的一項(xiàng)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，也是一項(xiàng)學(xué)術(shù)英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作技能。想要讓文章的 Coherence and Cohesion 更加學(xué)術(shù)并滿足評(píng)分要求，有四種方法。

1.use transition signal to link ideas（使用過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)）

2.repeat key nouns（重復(fù)關(guān)鍵名詞）

3.use consistent pronouns（使用一致性指代）

4.arrange your idea in logical order（以邏輯順序安排你的觀點(diǎn)）

這四種方法都可以讓你的文章更加有邏輯和說(shuō)服力，上篇文章討論了過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)的使用，本文將繼續(xù)討論重復(fù)關(guān)鍵名詞和使用一致性指代。

一．重復(fù)關(guān)鍵名詞：

如果我們?cè)谧x句子的時(shí)候，發(fā)現(xiàn)后一句子有一個(gè)詞匯和前一句相同或相似，我們會(huì)自然而然的認(rèn)為兩句之間是有關(guān)系的，所以我們?cè)趯?xiě)作的時(shí)候，可以使用重復(fù)關(guān)鍵名詞這種方法，來(lái)加深兩句之間的連貫。

1. One important stage in a child's growth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong. This skill comes with time and good parenting. (C10T1)

當(dāng)我們讀到“this skill”的時(shí)候，我們自然而然可以想到和上句的的“the ability to tell right  from wrong”之間是有關(guān)系的，這樣就會(huì)讓兩句之間的聯(lián)系更加緊密。

2.To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished.

這句話中的“a very young child”和“an infant”之間是同義詞語(yǔ)，所以我們?cè)谧x的時(shí)候，

會(huì)自然而然認(rèn)為前句和后句之間的聯(lián)系很緊密。

3. Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behaviour and discourage d from bad. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents

這句話中劃線的部分，我們使用的就是重復(fù)關(guān)鍵名詞，這樣讀起來(lái)就會(huì)覺(jué)得前后兩句是相關(guān)的。

二．代詞指代：

有時(shí)候，我們用太多的重復(fù)關(guān)鍵名詞會(huì)使得我們語(yǔ)言過(guò)于重復(fù)，所以我們除了使用關(guān)鍵名詞之外，還可以使用代詞的指代關(guān)系。

1. The main benefit of modern technology is that people's lives are much more convenient. This is because we are able to do many things without having to stay at the office or home, something which is extremely important given the busy lifestyles of today

這句話中的“this”指代前面的“people’s lives are much more convenient””，這兩句之間有關(guān)系

2. As a result, people are able to do their work, liaise with colleagues or friends, and check their emails anywhere they choose such as in coffee shops or while travelling on a train or bus.

 這句話中的“their”就是指代，代替的是“people”，

這樣我們也會(huì)覺(jué)得前后邏輯性較強(qiáng)。

總之，為了使得我們的文章，連貫和邏輯性更強(qiáng)，我們需要在文章中多使用重復(fù)關(guān)鍵名詞以及代詞的指代