托福寫作高分滿分范文點評

本期作文話題為：成功需要冒風(fēng)險?

托福寫作難點話題一覽

What does success come from, taking risks or careful planning?

Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risksor chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In youropinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.

寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

這道題目需要注意審題，雖然題目給出了兩種獲得成功的方法，但并沒有要求考生必須兩者擇其一來展開論述。所以大家完全可以寫得更加自由一些，比如可以這樣寫：有時候為了成功是應(yīng)該冒一些必要的風(fēng)險，但是為了成功詳盡的計劃也是必需的�；蛘哒f以上兩者都有道理，但我認(rèn)為為了成功，堅持才是最重要的等等。

本話題高分范文賞析

Magazines and newspapers never tire of telling stories aboutpeople who have come to success quickly by taking risks. However, the problemwith taking chances is that, while one can win a fortune, one can also loseeverything. Careful planning helps reduce that possibility, and it is a basicskill that all established business people have. Therefore, I believethat continued success in life willbe the result of careful planning as well as taking risks. Careful planning isa requisite part of life, especially when one's decisions can impact one's ownlife and the lives of others in a significant way. For example, the CEO of acompany must weigh all of his options cautiously. After all, his decisions willimpact not only his life and that of his family but also the lives of hisworkers and families. Due to a miscalculation on his part the company couldincur significant losses. These losses might be so substantial that the companywill be forced to cut jobs in order to save money or save the company itself.Therefore, the CEO's carelessness could cost him his job or, even worse, couldcost the jobs of other workers in the company who might be less well-off thanhim. At the same time, taking chances is necessary on the way to success.People who get too caught-up in careful planning often find themselves unableto make decisions. They are looking for more and more information in order to make a well informed assessment, but they aretaking too long. For example, the same CEO who plans the moves of his companycarefully so as to minimize the possibility of failure faces tough competitionin the business world. In order to stay ahead of his rivals he will have tomake decisions on the fly to beat out competing companies who are trying to buythe same materials or sell similar products. Thus, depending on the situation, taking a riskcould be necessary to save a company or to ensure its prosperity well into thefuture.

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