雅思寫作大作文主題句示例及講解

雅思寫作大作文是雅思寫作當(dāng)中備受矚目的部分，也是同學(xué)們最為關(guān)心的部分，所以本期新通教育雅思老師白媛為大家愛講解雅思寫作大作文主題句，幫助同學(xué)們認(rèn)清大作文主題句的誤區(qū)。

主題句在西方的書面語(yǔ)里面是很重要的。

舉個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的例子，在文章some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 關(guān)于是否要交稅，我們中國(guó)的說話習(xí)俗是： 我們要交稅，這樣政府有錢，有錢就可以建設(shè)公共設(shè)施，比如說學(xué)校，醫(yī)院，這樣人們的生活就可以更好，促進(jìn)了經(jīng)濟(jì)社會(huì)的發(fā)展。而西方的習(xí)慣是：我們要交稅，這樣大家可以生活的更好，社會(huì)經(jīng)濟(jì)都可以發(fā)展。因?yàn)檎�府有了錢就可以投資很多的公共設(shè)施，比如說學(xué)校，醫(yī)院。所以，在我們的雅思寫作中，主題句的寫作就很關(guān)鍵。要注意的是，主題句要和段落的內(nèi)容一致。

我們今天給大家展示一篇學(xué)生的作文，其中明顯的問題就是我們的主題句問題。這篇作文的題目是：Advertisements play a major role on TV in market economics. Despite the benefits of such information, many people criticize the role of TV advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their view?

我們來看一下學(xué)生的作文。

Advertising, as a major method of companies to publicize their products, has come to people’s vision more and more frequently and I don’t think it’s an actually good thing for us.

On one hand, TV advertisings certainly provide much information about new product for consumers, whereas most of that information is useless. Facing so many junk advertising when watching TV has raised audiences’ continuous complains. The advertisings interrupt TV programmes and spoil people’s enjoyment of the show. At times some channels arrange so many advertisings during the gap between programmes. The movie channel, for example, has almost fifteen -minute advertisings between the upper and the rest part of a film, let alone different films. As for teenagers or some adults, whose time are mainly occupied by mobile phones rather than TV, advertisings’ impact may be not obvious. But for those who are accustomed to watching TV, like some senior citizens or young children, watching TV programmes are their major entertainment activities. Keeping changing channels to find a nice programme without playing numerous advertisings is such a difficult thing, which almost drives them mad.

For another reason, the advertisings are designed to make products more attractive to consumers to achieve better effect. Some advertisers will divided into people into different groups and device suitable schemes to people in different groups respectively. However, the advertisings aiming at target population can be seen by everyone comparably, which means that children are exposed to media violence or sexual images at a higher risk. What’s more, children can be influenced by these advertisings easily and no one can promise that they will learn something bad from the advertisings.

從這篇文章中，我們能夠看到學(xué)生的第二段的主題句主要是說廣告沒用，而我們后面的段落主要內(nèi)容是在講廣告影響了我們看電視，所以跟本段的主題句內(nèi)容完全不符，這就說明我么你的主題句是有問題的。而我們的第二個(gè)理由段中，主題句講的是廣告讓產(chǎn)品更有吸引力了，但是我們的內(nèi)容卻是廣告的內(nèi)容可能會(huì)影響人，這個(gè)依然是不符的。

雅思寫作大作文主題句的示例及講解就到這里，如果銅須麼恩想通過雅思寫作課程提升自己的雅思寫作能力，獲得滿意的成績(jī)，請(qǐng)點(diǎn)擊此處咨詢。

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