托福綜合寫作的毛病一次性給你治好

 托福綜合寫作中有不少同學(xué)容易犯以下常見錯(cuò)誤，今天小編就給大家來治治病~

01

病癥1：可以照抄綜合寫作的閱讀部分

治療：

要改寫，并且起碼做到：

①句式

②語序

這兩點(diǎn)之一要替換掉，這才叫改寫呀!

02

病癥2： 綜寫評(píng)分點(diǎn)都在聽力部分，閱讀主干提煉的一般般也沒啥大事

治療：

首先，聽力>閱讀。

但是：

①閱讀寫錯(cuò)了是要扣分的;

②閱讀如果寫不清的話，后面你也無法闡述清是閱讀部分是如何對(duì)應(yīng)到聽力里被否定、被反駁的，這樣的話是拿不到大good的。

03

病癥3：綜合寫作詞數(shù)不夠沒啥事

治療：

150-225，都是按照官方標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(但寫少了會(huì)扣分喲)。

通常，210左右是大多數(shù)同學(xué)在規(guī)定時(shí)間內(nèi)能夠完成的，并且能把作文寫清楚的數(shù)字。

另外托福綜合寫作高分取決于

1.對(duì)聽力內(nèi)容的還原程度;

2.語言表達(dá)的優(yōu)劣，包括：句式多樣性、語言運(yùn)用的準(zhǔn)確程度、詞組的運(yùn)用能力以及語義表達(dá)的的邏輯性

你的薄弱環(huán)節(jié)在哪里呢?快快操練起來吧~

附上托福綜合寫作各段落常用句式：

開頭段

The lecture apparently disproves what is argued in the reading material. According to the passage … However the professor asserts that a closer scrutiny of this argument would reveal how flimsy it is. He then presents several evidences to demonstrate his statement.

內(nèi)容第一段

To start with, the professor claims that the reading passage fails to take into account that…

Therefore, the assertion of the author seems too absolute since other possibilities could not be eliminated by any current evidence.

內(nèi)容第二段

Furthermore, the passage assumes that…. The professor, however, suggests that this assumption may not be merited by the evidence. Say, ….. The contradiction is obvious here when … . On the basis of this point the lecture explicitly refutes the passage.

內(nèi)容第三段

Last but not the least, the passage may be right about …., but one critical fact is being left out of consideration. Pointed out by the professor, the author totally neglects the truth that… On account of above-mentioned grave mistakes, the author’s assertion turned out to be a preposterous idea.

結(jié)尾段

In conclusion, based on the arguments offered above, the professor clearly identifies the defects in the reading passage and forcefully shows that…

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