托福寫作之文章結構學習(上)

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寫作中，文章結構的把控對于整體的得分來講哈市非常有影響的。如何更好的分配文章結構是一件非常關鍵的任務。

通過分類舉例方法，我們的文章結構有2種可能：

(1) 一邊倒： 所列舉的3種情況都支撐一邊。 總觀點就是totally agree/disagree

(2) 中立：所列舉的2/3種情況 支撐不同的邊。 總觀點就是：depends on xx (分類的標準，比如：age group; jobs ... )

因為“一邊倒”總觀點需要我們所列舉的3種情況能夠包含所有的情況，所以比較難。

所以推薦大家有意識地選擇 中立總觀點。

范文一：一邊倒總觀點的文章結構.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

People should not pay for the public transportation.

人們不應該為公共交通系統(tǒng)付費。

In this day and age, passengers are charged for their riding. Since most of the mass transportation facilities[交通設備] are partially owned by the private businesses, the system generally aims at the maximization of profits. I strongly believe that people should pay for the public transportation, including city buses, highways and trains, for the following reasons.

[雖然作者舉例了三種情況，但是因為三種情況都 支持要付費，所以總觀點還是要支持 付費。總觀點是絕對的總觀點。

并且bus; highways; trains 三者基本上都涵蓋了公共交通的所有方式。所以一邊倒也可以]

Firstly, people should pay for the city buses for better service quality. For one thing, the profits can act as a driven force for the bus companies to improve their service. They tend to increase the number of buses, optimize[優(yōu)化] the driving courses and do well in maintaining the bus to attract more passengers and boost the profits. For another, profits will surely intensify the competition(激發(fā)競爭)between bus companies, which will finally lead to the entire improvement of the bus service system.

Secondly, people should pay for the highway system since the government built the highways as investments. If people stop paying, government may stop building more highways and it will result in the inconvenience and low efficiency of traffic system. For example, the citizens in my hometown have ever been reluctant to(不樂意) pay for the highway. What is more, some illegal long-distance transportation firms which used the highway frequently do not pay for the fees and beat the cashiers in the highway very seriously. Several months later, the government had to close the highway because they failed in investments. This phenomenon negatively influenced upon and set back the development of the local economy.

Finally, people should pay for the trains. There are different classes of train tickets such as hard-seat tickets, sleeper tickets and non-seat tickets. If passengers take it without paying, it will be difficult to reach an agreement among the passengers on the fair distribution(分配) of tickets and seats. The more you pay for, the better seat you should keep. Furthermore, it will be a heavy burden for the government to support the train system independently.

To sum up, I insist that we should pay for public transportation. It is the right for everyone to benefit from the mass transportation, and it is also everyone’s responsibility to support it.

最后的總結也要再強調(diào)一下自己的觀點。對于自己的作文把控，結尾是非常重要的。

好用的詞或者短語

optimize[優(yōu)化] the driving courses

intensify the competition(激發(fā)競爭)

driven force 驅(qū)動力

boost the profits 促進利益

a heavy burden for ....沉重的負擔

hard-seat tickets, sleeper tickets and non-seat tickets：硬座票 臥鋪票 站票

本期雅思寫作文章結構就先講解到這里，在文章當中，老師還為大家拓展了一些用詞，希望同學們能將這些詞牢記并應用到自己的考試當中。本篇是托福寫作文章結構老師給大家分析并做了示例，希望能給同學么能帶來幫助。當然，新通教育西安還為大家提供多種班型的，幫助同學們提升成績。

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