托福寫作中如何避免用詞句式空洞重復(fù)？

托福寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中對(duì)考生作文的用詞和句式有所要求，如果大家寫出的托福作文中存在較多的用詞重復(fù)以及句式空洞等問題，那么得分不可避免地會(huì)受到一定影響。其實(shí)想要解決這類問題很簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)會(huì)改寫句式就可以應(yīng)對(duì)。下面杭州新通外語(yǔ)學(xué)校的小編就為大家介紹具體方法。

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托福寫作如何避免用詞空洞?

1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組更本不能為句子帶來任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：

When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.

這句話當(dāng)中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion”都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have now.

托福寫作如何減少內(nèi)容重復(fù)?

1.盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯�；蛘哂械臅r(shí)候雖然詞匯沒有重復(fù)，但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時(shí)候可以做一些簡(jiǎn)化的工作。例如下面這個(gè)例子：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

Large 對(duì)一個(gè)farm來說就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改為：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)方式為：My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2. 有時(shí)一個(gè)詞組可以用一個(gè)更簡(jiǎn)單的單詞來替換，例如：

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly，顯得更為簡(jiǎn)潔：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

以上就是關(guān)于托福寫作中避免用詞句式空洞重復(fù)的改寫技巧分享，杭州新通外語(yǔ)學(xué)校的小編希望大家能夠?qū)W會(huì)這些方法，提升作文的詞句質(zhì)量，獲得更好地作文得分。

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