如何寫出高水平的雅思作文？

雅思寫作成績高的作文總是相似的，而得分低的作文各有各的缺陷。今天我們聊的是什么樣的是高水平的，怎么才能寫出高分雅思作文？

1.連接手段使用得自然多樣

論點(diǎn)之間如何連接?有哪些連接手段?下面這個(gè)段落的中心內(nèi)容是看電視太多產(chǎn)生的問題，共有三個(gè)論點(diǎn)。所使用的連接手段是正確有效的，但是單一，少變化。每一個(gè)論點(diǎn)之間都使用了副詞做連接詞，而且都是在句首。

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems. Firstly, it is bad for children’s health. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body. Secondly, if children spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Last but not least, watching TV too long, children may become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

下面的段落是對照版本。其中使用了代詞，副詞和形容詞等多種連接手段，而且做到了自然銜接：

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems and the most obvious one is the negative impact on physical health of children. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body.Another concern is about social development of children. If they spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Children watching TV too long may also become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

2.有邏輯有條理地組織論點(diǎn)

一篇文章只有一個(gè)立場，但是論點(diǎn)可以有幾個(gè)。那么這幾個(gè)論點(diǎn)如何排列，哪個(gè)在前哪個(gè)在后呢?這些是有講究的，同學(xué)們不能想到哪寫哪兒。下面的段落是學(xué)生的例文，其中就存在論點(diǎn)排列的問題

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible, because young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours, and the information online can be good and bad as well. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

這段文字的中心內(nèi)容是網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)存在的問題。論點(diǎn)包括兩個(gè)，學(xué)生的自律和網(wǎng)絡(luò)的內(nèi)容。關(guān)于學(xué)生自律的問題有兩句話，young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours,以及 If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day.這兩句話有相關(guān)性，但是卻被網(wǎng)絡(luò)那句話隔開了。這樣會給讀者造成閱讀的障礙，降低文章的流暢度。所以重新調(diào)整這幾句話的位置，就可以很快解決這個(gè)問題。

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible. Young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. And the information online can be good and bad as well. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

關(guān)于作文的特點(diǎn)，我們本篇暫時(shí)給大家分享到這里，如果同學(xué)們對感興趣，或者在過程中遇到了自己無法解決的困難，可以，相信在專業(yè)老師的帶領(lǐng)下，大家的會有更高的效率。

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