托福成績是去美國留學的必備硬件,但是很多同學都卡在了托福寫作這一關不知道如何下筆,因此,新通教育托福寫作培訓老師為大家總結(jié)了托福獨立寫作如何寫好文章開頭段。
是有出國留學夢的同學們必須要邁過的一個門檻,而寫作是里面相對比較難的一項,很多同學的分數(shù)都卡在這個單項上面了。其中特別是獨立寫作是很多同學感到比較難的一項。 特別是當拿到題目,準備開始寫開頭段的時候,往往不知道如何下筆。那么今天我們就來就開頭段的寫法分話題進行一個逐步的分析:
1. 教育類作文的開頭段:
例題1:Do you agree or disagree with the statement: University students should be required to take care basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study.
那么就這樣的例題,我們就可以以這樣的開頭段為例:
Eg. University curriculum determines what kind of education students receive and what kind of educational philosophy the university maintains.(背景句,引入今天的題目的大背景) Some educators advocate incorporating basic science into compulsory courses no matter what fields students major in(改寫題目). Personally, I do not think it is a smart move(最后一句表明自己的觀點).
例題2:Some people advocate students going to school for 9 months a year in a row and take a rest for 3 months. While another point of view favors three months of school with one month for rest. Which do you prefer(2015.10.10)
When it comes to school arrangements, opinions vary from person to person.(常用的,也是學生們非常喜歡用的背景句) Some educators believe learning for 9 consecutive months can promote performance while others argue that students need a break every other 3 months(改寫題目). If I were to decide, this problem should be answered case by case(表明自己的觀點).
2. 工作類話題開頭段的寫法:
例題一:A low paying but secure job is better than a job with higher salary but less security.
開頭段可以這樣來寫:Some job seekers contend that stability counts the most when entering the workforce while others give priority to material gain that comes with the job(這種開頭段的寫法是把背景和話題糅合到一個句子里面了,其實這也是很好的寫法,因為并不是每個開頭段都需要一定去寫背景句,而直接把背景和話題以巧妙的方式融合在一起也是沒有任何問題的). I, however, think this issue should be analyzed case by case(表明自己的觀點).
例題二:Future career success relies more on relating to other people more than studying hard at school.
The definition of success varies from person to person.(背景句開始鋪陳) Some may attribute a successful life to diligence while others argue socializing abilities should be given more emphasis.(改寫題目)As for me , success depends on communicative skills, teamwork spirit and social circle, which are easily available in a person who relate well to others. (自己觀點和立場的清晰表明)
3. 性格品質(zhì)類話題開頭段的寫法:
例題一:You need to be different to succeed rather then acting like people around you.
Success can be perceived and achieved in many different ways.(背景句) Some people believe being different holds the key while others attribute success to finding common grounds. (改寫題目)I would like to go the former view because successful depends on knowledge, experience and social circle.(表明自己的觀點)
那么以上就是我們今天分析的三個獨立寫作話題分類的開頭段的寫法。同學們在寫得時候可以參考一下,記住,主要的三個成分是:背景+改寫考題+表明自己的觀點。
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