雅思考官討厭什么樣的雅思作文?

總有那么一些同學(xué)，一到寫作考試，就拿出高中給李華同學(xué)寫信的句式甩開膀子瘋狂寫，這樣讓考官看了想打人的開頭，你自己都不想看，更何況呢。得不了高分是自然的事情。所以同學(xué)們，上想要獲得高分，那就拿出你的求生欲，作文開頭追求創(chuàng)新，千萬不要像下面小編給大家舉的這些例子一樣。

一、偏離主題

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★☆

上榜理由：文不對(duì)題自然會(huì)扣分，給考官留下的印象就是跑題，想想整體寫作分?jǐn)?shù)還會(huì)高么?

比如：

寫作主題：It is said that nowadays one can‘t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

案例：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

二、中式英語

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★★

上榜理由：用中式英文開頭，不僅會(huì)讓考官看不懂，還暴露了你的語言功底，語料積累匱乏，是中的大忌。

比如：

寫作主題 1：The happiest moment in your life

案例：In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

寫作主題 2：The population problem

案例：The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

寫作主題 3：Is there fairness in today’s business world?

案例：I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

三、胡亂翻譯中國俗語

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★★

上榜理由：胡亂翻譯中國俗語會(huì)起反作用，畢竟考官對(duì)中國俗語并不“感冒”，反而會(huì)引起考官反感。

比如：

寫作主題 1：Is it good to have a large family?

案例：I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

寫作主題 2：Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

案例：Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

寫作主題 3：The advantage of being a nice person

案例：I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

四、觀點(diǎn)不明朗

討厭指數(shù)：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：很重要的一點(diǎn)就是你的邏輯性和觀點(diǎn)，如果觀點(diǎn)都不明確，后面的舉例證明等都會(huì)缺乏說服力，自然分?jǐn)?shù)也不會(huì)高。

比如：

寫作主題：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

五、超級(jí)啰嗦

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★☆

上榜理由：開篇就要主題明了清晰，上來就啰啰嗦嗦表達(dá)不清，考官自然認(rèn)為你的觀點(diǎn)模糊，甚至不會(huì)表達(dá)。

比如：

寫作主題 1：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

寫作主題 2：Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

案例：Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

篇幅原因，討厭什么樣的?（一）就先跟大家降到這里，之后我們會(huì)繼續(xù)給大家分享他不喜歡什么樣的，敬請(qǐng)期待~

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