很多考生問我如何提升雅思寫作分?jǐn)?shù)到7分或者更高，這個確實(shí)不是一個簡單可以回答的問題，但是幸運(yùn)的是這里有一些小建議可以供你參考。
以下，我將會給你展示要提高技巧時你要關(guān)注的領(lǐng)域，助你獲得。
1. Avoid really, so, a lot, very
避免使用really, so, a lot, very
在雅思寫作中，你需要使用學(xué)術(shù)語言，你的目標(biāo)是正式和學(xué)術(shù)，所以你不要使用較為口語化的表達(dá)，如really, so , a lot and very.
舉一些例子:
Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is very hard.
=> Use a stronger word: Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is difficult.
Robot-driven car is really controversial
=> Robot-driven car is controversial
A lot of IELTS learners share their great tips on IELTS writing, speaking on IELTS Material website.
=> Many/A great number of/ A multitude of IELTS learners……
2. Avoid “There is / There are”
避免使用 There is / There are
當(dāng)你在寫作的時候，努力將你的想法用一種簡潔的方法呈現(xiàn)出來，有些詞語是不需要的，這樣你的句子可以更加直戳重點(diǎn)。
例子:
There are many issues that students have to face at university
=> Students face a multitude of issues at university
3. Vary your sentence length
句子長度多樣化
如果你知道不同的句子類型，你就可以試著多多練習(xí)。在眾多句型中，復(fù)合復(fù)雜句是最難的，不過就算你不懂這個語法，嘗試用一系列的簡單句，復(fù)雜句，和復(fù)合句相結(jié)合來寫這篇文章，你也可以得到一個很好的分?jǐn)?shù)。這個關(guān)鍵就在于句子類型和句子長度要靈活多變，這樣你的文章也會比較自然�？匆粋�下面的例子：
Firstly, children watch too much TV. It’s bad for their health. It can make them addicted. They will spend too much time indoors. This can make them fat.
這個例子就是句子太短，你可以把句子連接在一起，會發(fā)現(xiàn)得到一個更加耐看的版本。
=>Firstly, children watch too much TV, which is bad for their health. This habit can cause them to become addicted, resulting in them spending too much time indoors and thus getting fat.
4. Remember collocation
牢記固定搭配
學(xué)生們在準(zhǔn)備雅思考試的時候總會學(xué)習(xí)很多的詞匯，這對于我們提高英文理解是十分重要的，然而有些時候，“知道一個詞語的含義”和“會使用它”還是有一定區(qū)別的。
在文章中學(xué)習(xí)一個單詞會使得你在使用這個詞時更加容易。當(dāng)你學(xué)習(xí)詞匯的時候，一定要注意的是什么樣子的搭配會常常在一起。
我們來舉幾個例子：
Verb + thought:
Spare a thought for 想到，替……著想
Spare a thought for all those who are homeless on a cold night like this.
想到那些在寒冷的夜晚中無家可歸的人。
Hear ones thought 聆聽……的想法
Have you given the new proposal any thought yet? We’re keen to hear your thought
你有沒有考慮新提議了嗎?我們渴望聽到你的想法嗎?
The thought occurs to someone
某人有了一個想法
The thought just occurs to me that it’s mum’s birthday tomorrow and we haven’t got her a card.
我突然間想到明天是我媽媽的生日，我們還沒有給她卡片呢。
Gather one’s thought
理清思路
The President was taken aback by the question and took a minute to gather his thoughts.
總統(tǒng)被這個問題嚇了一跳，并用一分鐘的時間來理清思路。
Noun + preposition + thought:
great deal of thought
很多想法，大量思考
Shirley doesn’t devote a great deal of thought to her appearance.
雪莉?qū)λ耐獗頉]有太多想法。
freedom of thought
思想自由
Some places don’t encourage freedom of thought.
有些地方不鼓勵思想自由。
school of thought
思想派別
One school of thought contends that modern man originated in Central Africa.
某學(xué)派認(rèn)為：現(xiàn)代人類起源于非洲中部。
train of thought
思路，思緒
Sorry, where was I? I’ve lost my train of thought.
對不起，我說到哪里了?我剛剛沒了思路
5. Do not use Contractions in academic writing
不要在學(xué)術(shù)寫作中使用縮略形式
Don’t => do not
Can’t => cannot
Mustn’t => must not
Couldn’t => could not
Wouldn’t => would not
Isn’t => is not
Haven’t => have not
Hasn’t => has not
6. Know the sentence types
知道句子類型
了解簡單句和復(fù)雜句式的區(qū)別很重要，你不需要知道術(shù)語，但是你需要有能力自己完成一個句子的寫作，了解以下句子類型可以幫助你避免許多基本的寫作錯誤。
SENTENCE FRAGMENTS:
片斷句(不完整的句子)
這是雅思考生經(jīng)常犯的錯誤：缺少句子成分的句子片斷是不可以單獨(dú)成句的，因?yàn)樗⒉痪邆涑蔀橐粋�完整的獨(dú)立分句的要素。
記住，一個簡單句就是一個合格的獨(dú)立分句，它由3要素組成：
1. A subject
2. A verb
3. A complete thought
主語，謂語，和一個完整的思路。
有時看起來像一個句子，但是當(dāng)我們仔細(xì)研究時會發(fā)現(xiàn)它缺少了許多很關(guān)鍵的成分，因此它并不能成為一個獨(dú)立的句子。
例子:
Ø The doctor worked round the clock. Operating on the boy.
Ø As India has entered the WTO. The local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.
我們怎么改正這些句子呢?
=> The doctor worked around the clock, operating on the boy.
=> As India has entered the WTO, the local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.
RUN-ON SENTENCES:
粘連句
粘連句包含著兩個或更多的主句，他們連在一起，沒有標(biāo)點(diǎn)分隔(逗號、分號、句號等)。我們在說話的時候經(jīng)常使用這樣的粘連句，但是我們可以用停頓來表述清楚含義。而在寫文章的時候，我們需要用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號來分隔我們的句子，讓它有更明確的表達(dá)含義。
【逗號誤接句】就是兩個獨(dú)立主句之間用逗號連接，這是很多考生會犯的錯誤。記住，逗號不能連接兩個獨(dú)立的句子，你需要添加連接詞來使它變完整，或者使用分號或者連接副詞。
更重要的一點(diǎn)，想在雅思寫作中拿高分，你不需要對所有標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號的使用都了如指掌，了解逗號和句號的使用方法就足夠了。
例子:
Ø Van Gogh is a world-famous artist his paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
Ø Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet, his most famous poem is Howl.
我們怎么改正呢?=> Van Gogh is a world-famous artist whose paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
=> Van Gogh is a world-famous artist. His paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
=> Van Gogh is a world-famous artist; his paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.
=> Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet, whose most famous poem is Howl.
=> Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet. His most famous poem is Howl.
=> Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet; his most famous poem is Howl.
那正如我們可以看到的，不僅僅只有一個方法來改正錯誤，但是一定要根據(jù)句子最最準(zhǔn)確的含義來改正。
COMMA SPLICES:
逗號誤接句
這一點(diǎn)在前面已經(jīng)強(qiáng)調(diào)了，要十分小心在用逗號鏈接兩個句子時，要避免前后兩個句子都出現(xiàn)謂語動詞。
比如：
Ø The dog was hungry, he wanted some food.
我們可以用很多方法來改正它：
=> The dog was hungry; he wanted some food.
=> The dog was hungry. He wanted some food.
=> The dog was hungry, and he wanted some food.
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