雅思寫(xiě)作失分是因?yàn)榭倢?xiě)小學(xué)生句子？

你覺(jué)得自己雅思寫(xiě)作最大的問(wèn)題是什么?大多數(shù)人都會(huì)不約而同的回答：我的句式太簡(jiǎn)單了。

這是中國(guó)考生的通病，總以為英語(yǔ)一定要堆砌高級(jí)詞匯、套用復(fù)雜句句型才能拿高分，卻往往得不償失。

英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作失分原因

同學(xué)們的文章實(shí)際長(zhǎng)這樣：

a. Universities usually limit the quantity of new students as well as their genders to create more effective performances of their students with regard to this gender trait. (5分學(xué)生作品)

句子乍一看沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題，但詞語(yǔ)之間的邏輯混亂，導(dǎo)致理解障礙;

或者長(zhǎng)這樣：

b. Secondly, even though using distance-learning programmes could provide any person with opportunities to learning knowledge in anywhere. While the computer or the study material post only can offer a correct answer or explain to students, the comprehension capability of every student varies from student to student, make it impossible for the computer to offer and explain catered to a students’ particular level of understanding.(5分學(xué)生作品)

復(fù)雜句和簡(jiǎn)單句都存在許多問(wèn)題，寫(xiě)作評(píng)分在5分段。

上面的句式絕對(duì)不簡(jiǎn)單，但是不是有一種看起來(lái)很高級(jí)、卻完全讀不懂的感覺(jué)?

我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn)5分考生們的句式不但不簡(jiǎn)單，還非常復(fù)雜，問(wèn)題更多的是出在了句子的邏輯通順和理解上。

英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作基本原則

Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.

簡(jiǎn)潔是英文寫(xiě)作的靈魂，為了做到這一點(diǎn)，要學(xué)會(huì)去掉所有無(wú)關(guān)的信息，同時(shí)還要學(xué)會(huì)精簡(jiǎn)表達(dá)，一件事情能用一個(gè)詞說(shuō)清楚就堅(jiān)決不用兩個(gè)詞。

烤鴨們需要明白communication, accuracy, complexity在雅思寫(xiě)作中的優(yōu)先順序：

綜合來(lái)看，communication(即表達(dá)清楚意思，考官看得懂)是根本;

任何犧牲c(diǎn)ommunication 的高級(jí)表達(dá)都是耍流氓，分?jǐn)?shù)不會(huì)超過(guò)6分，a和b 兩位同學(xué)都在這里掉了鏈子;

其次是accuracy表達(dá)正確，比表達(dá)高級(jí)來(lái)的更加重要。如果能做到這兩點(diǎn)，再能適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂胏omplex sentences，就能起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用，語(yǔ)法果斷上6分，甚至沖7分。

雅思寫(xiě)作高分和復(fù)雜句

c. First of all, studying in school allows students to arrange their time reasonably to ensure efficient learning. Teachers in school provide fixed time table for studying. By contrast, study time via Internet is rather flexible; students have the freedom to study by themselves, but for students who lack self-control, their learning task might stay unfinished when the deadline comes.

(烤鴨6分習(xí)作)

雅思寫(xiě)作要上6分，語(yǔ)法要多難，究竟該不該使用復(fù)雜句?我們來(lái)看一下c同學(xué)平時(shí)聯(lián)系作業(yè)(最終雅思寫(xiě)作考分6.5)：

相比之下，c同學(xué)的寫(xiě)作句式完全沒(méi)有上面復(fù)雜，但是意思清楚，合理運(yùn)用連接詞，文章的論證邏輯基本合理。

綜上，我們可以得出結(jié)論：雅思寫(xiě)作最主要的是要表達(dá)清晰，邏輯清楚，不需要過(guò)分追求長(zhǎng)難句。

最后祝大家早日考出好成績(jī)~