雅思寫作高分經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享

有很多同學(xué)考作文的時(shí)候分?jǐn)?shù)一直在原地踏步，甚至有一些同學(xué)掉分了！很多同學(xué)都不知道這么樣才能提升分?jǐn)?shù)。小編讓的老師給我們寫了一些得分重點(diǎn)！

1. Avoid really, so, a lot, very  避免使用really, so, a lot, very

在雅思寫作中，你需要使用學(xué)術(shù)語言，你的目標(biāo)是正式和學(xué)術(shù)，所以你不要使用較為口語化的表達(dá)，如really, so , a lot and very.

舉一些例子:

（1）Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is very hard.=> Use a stronger word: Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is difficult.

（2）Robot-driven car is really controversial=> Robot-driven car is controversial

（3）A lot of IELTS learners share their great tips on IELTS writing, speaking on IELTS Material website.=> Many/A great number of/ A multitude of IELTS learners……

2. Avoid “There is / There are”    避免使用 There is / There are

當(dāng)你在寫作的時(shí)候，努力將你的想法用一種簡(jiǎn)潔的方法呈現(xiàn)出來，有些詞語是不需要的，這樣你的句子可以更加直戳重點(diǎn)。

例子:

There are many issues that students have to face at university=> Students face a multitude of issues at university

3. Vary your sentence length   句子長(zhǎng)度多樣化

如果你知道不同的句子類型，你就可以試著多多練習(xí)。在眾多句型中，復(fù)合復(fù)雜句是最難的，不過就算你不懂這個(gè)語法，嘗試用一系列的簡(jiǎn)單句，復(fù)雜句，和復(fù)合句相結(jié)合來寫這篇文章，你也可以得到一個(gè)很好的分?jǐn)?shù)。這個(gè)關(guān)鍵就在于句子類型和句子長(zhǎng)度要靈活多變，這樣你的文章也會(huì)比較自然。看一個(gè)下面的例子：

（1）Firstly, children watch too much TV. It’s bad for their health. It can make them addicted. They will spend too much time indoors. This can make them fat.

這個(gè)例子就是句子太短，你可以把句子連接在一起，會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)得到一個(gè)更加耐看的版本。

（2）=>Firstly, children watch too much TV, which is bad for their health. This habit can cause them to become addicted, resulting in them spending too much time indoors and thus getting fat.

4. Remember collocation  牢記固定搭配

學(xué)生們?cè)跍?zhǔn)備的時(shí)候總會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)很多的詞匯，這對(duì)于我們提高英文理解是十分重要的，然而有些時(shí)候，“知道一個(gè)詞語的含義”和“會(huì)使用它”還是有一定區(qū)別的。

在文章中學(xué)習(xí)一個(gè)單詞會(huì)使得你在使用這個(gè)詞時(shí)更加容易。當(dāng)你學(xué)習(xí)詞匯的時(shí)候，一定要注意的是什么樣子的搭配會(huì)常常在一起。

我們來舉幾個(gè)例子：

（1）
Verb + thought:
Spare a thought for 想到，替……著想
Spare a thought for all those who are homeless on a cold night like this.
想到那些在寒冷的夜晚中無家可歸的人。

（2）
Hear ones thought 聆聽……的想法
Have you given the new proposal any thought yet? We’re keen to hear your thought
你有沒有考慮新提議了嗎?我們渴望聽到你的想法嗎?

（3）
The thought occurs to someone
某人有了一個(gè)想法
The thought just occurs to me that it’s mum’s birthday tomorrow and we haven’t got her a card.
我突然間想到明天是我媽媽的生日，我們還沒有給她卡片呢。

（4）
Gather one’s thought
理清思路
The President was taken aback by the question and took a minute to gather his thoughts.
總統(tǒng)被這個(gè)問題嚇了一跳，并用一分鐘的時(shí)間來理清思路。

（5）
Noun + preposition + thought:
great deal of thought
很多想法，大量思考
Shirley doesn’t devote a great deal of thought to her appearance.
雪莉?qū)λ�的外表沒有太多想法。

（6）
freedom of thought
思想自由
Some places don’t encourage freedom of thought.
有些地方不鼓勵(lì)思想自由。

（7）
school of thought
思想派別
One school of thought contends that modern man originated in Central Africa.
某學(xué)派認(rèn)為：現(xiàn)代人類起源于非洲中部。

（8）
train of thought
思路，思緒
Sorry, where was I? I’ve lost my train of thought.
對(duì)不起，我說到哪里了？我剛剛沒了思路

5. Do not use Contractions in academic writing  不要在學(xué)術(shù)寫作中使用縮略形式

Don’t => do not
Can’t => cannot
Mustn’t => must not
Couldn’t => could not
Wouldn’t => would not
Isn’t => is not
Haven’t => have not
Hasn’t => has not

 6. Know the sentence types  知道句子類型

了解簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)雜句式的區(qū)別很重要，你不需要知道術(shù)語，但是你需要有能力自己完成一個(gè)句子的寫作，了解以下句子類型可以幫助你避免許多基本的寫作錯(cuò)誤。

（1）SENTENCE FRAGMENTS:  片斷句（不完整的句子）

這是雅思考生經(jīng)常犯的錯(cuò)誤：缺少句子成分的句子片斷是不可以單獨(dú)成句的，因?yàn)樗�并不具備成為一個(gè)完整的獨(dú)立分句的要素。

記住，一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句就是一個(gè)合格的獨(dú)立分句，它由3要素組成：

1. A subject
2. A verb
3. A complete thought

主語，謂語，和一個(gè)完整的思路。

有時(shí)看起來像一個(gè)句子，但是當(dāng)我們仔細(xì)研究時(shí)會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)它缺少了許多很關(guān)鍵的成分，因此它并不能成為一個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子。

例子:

Ø The doctor worked round the clock. Operating on the boy.

Ø As India has entered the WTO. The local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.

我們?cè)趺锤恼�這些句子呢?

=> The doctor worked around the clock, operating on the boy.

=> As India has entered the WTO, the local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.

（2）RUN-ON SENTENCES: 粘連句

粘連句包含著兩個(gè)或更多的主句，他們連在一起，沒有標(biāo)點(diǎn)分隔(逗號(hào)、分號(hào)、句號(hào)等)。我們?cè)谡f話的時(shí)候經(jīng)常使用這樣的粘連句，但是我們可以用停頓來表述清楚含義。而在寫文章的時(shí)候，我們需要用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)來分隔我們的句子，讓它有更明確的表達(dá)含義。

【逗號(hào)誤接句】就是兩個(gè)獨(dú)立主句之間用逗號(hào)連接，這是很多考生會(huì)犯的錯(cuò)誤。記住，逗號(hào)不能連接兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子，你需要添加連接詞來使它變完整，或者使用分號(hào)或者連接副詞。

更重要的一點(diǎn)，想在雅思寫作中拿高分，你不需要對(duì)所有標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用都了如指掌，了解逗號(hào)和句號(hào)的使用方法就足夠了。

例子:

Ø Van Gogh is a world-famous artist his paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.

Ø Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet, his most famous poem is Howl.

我們?cè)趺锤恼��?=> Van Gogh is a world-famous artist whose paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.

=> Van Gogh is a world-famous artist. His paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.

=> Van Gogh is a world-famous artist; his paintings can be found in many museums and art galleries.

=> Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet, whose most famous poem is Howl.

=> Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet. His most famous poem is Howl.

=> Allen Ginsberg is a renowned American poet; his most famous poem is Howl.

那正如我們可以看到的，不僅僅只有一個(gè)方法來改正錯(cuò)誤，但是一定要根據(jù)句子最最準(zhǔn)確的含義來改正。

（3）COMMA SPLICES:逗號(hào)誤接句

這一點(diǎn)在前面已經(jīng)強(qiáng)調(diào)了，要十分小心在用逗號(hào)鏈接兩個(gè)句子時(shí)，要避免前后兩個(gè)句子都出現(xiàn)謂語動(dòng)詞。

比如：

Ø The dog was hungry, he wanted some food.

我們可以用很多方法來改正它：

=> The dog was hungry; he wanted some food.

=> The dog was hungry. He wanted some food.

=> The dog was hungry, and he wanted some food.

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