2016年11月5日托福寫作預(yù)測(cè)

11.5托福寫作預(yù)測(cè)

托福大作文中我們經(jīng)常會(huì)看到一種題目是問政府應(yīng)該把錢投入到小學(xué)教育還是大學(xué)教育中，或者問錢應(yīng)該是用于植樹還是用于建造房屋，我們今天我來學(xué)習(xí)下這種問法的題目我們應(yīng)該怎么來寫：

題目：
　　The money spent by governments on space program would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. Do you agree or disagree?

首先大家在審題的時(shí)候一定看清楚人家是怎么問的，明顯題目是問你是否同意：錢應(yīng)該投入到公共服務(wù)而不是外太空探險(xiǎn)，但是有的同學(xué)沒仔細(xì)看可能就把意思完全理解反了，在開始動(dòng)筆寫之前，大家一定要先構(gòu)思，如果這題我們寫成同意，那么中間主體段兩段就應(yīng)該寫成為什么不要再在外太空上花錢以及把錢花在公共服務(wù)上的好處。

一起來看一下我們的開頭段如何來寫，大家在寫開頭段的時(shí)候一定要注意，開頭段不要寫得太啰嗦，三句話: 引出題目, 表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，理由如下即可。A fast, effective and short introduction is better. 按照這樣的要求寫出來的開頭段就是這樣的：

It is true that governments in some countries spend large amounts of money on space exploration program. I completely agree with the idea that these are a waste of money, and that the funds should be allocated to public services. To verify the validity of my perspective, I will give a couple of compelling reasons.

接下來我們一起來看下主體段的寫法。大家在展開主體段的時(shí)候，主要可以采用兩種結(jié)構(gòu)來寫，一種是topic sentence + firstly + secondly + finally的結(jié)構(gòu)，另外一種是idea + explain + example的結(jié)構(gòu)，這兩種展開方式最最主要的區(qū)別是你到底能夠想出幾個(gè)點(diǎn)來論述這個(gè)主體段落，如果是只有一個(gè)點(diǎn)那么大家就是采用idea + explain + example來展開，而如果大家能夠想出不止一個(gè)點(diǎn)，大家就可以采取topic sentence + firstly + secondly + finally這樣的形式來展開了，下面這兩個(gè)主體段我們都是采用topic sentence + firstly + secondly + finally的結(jié)構(gòu)，很明顯，從更多的點(diǎn)來進(jìn)行展開，寫起來肯定會(huì)更加容易一些。
 
　　There are several reasons why space program should be abandoned. First of all, it is extremely expensive to train scientists and other staff involved with space missions, and facilities and equipment also come at a huge cost to the government. Secondly, these programs do not benefit normal people in our daily lives; they are simply vanity projects for politicians. Finally, many missions to space fail completely, and the smallest technological error can cost astronauts their lives. The Challenger space shuttle disaster, for example, showed us that space travel is extremely dangerous, and in my opinion it is not worth the risk.
 
　　I believe that the money from space program should go to vital public services instead. It is much cheaper to train doctors, teachers, police and other public service workers than it is to train astronauts or the scientists and engineers who work on space exploration projects. In addition to this, public servants do jobs that have a positive impact on every member of society. For example, we all use schools, hospitals and roads, and we all need the security that the police provide. If governments reallocated the money spent on space travel and research, many thousands of people could be lifted out of poverty or given a better quality of life.
 
　　最后一段是結(jié)尾段，結(jié)尾段通常只需要一句話就可以了，重申下自己的觀點(diǎn)即可。跟我們開頭段一樣，結(jié)尾段同樣不要寫得太啰嗦太復(fù)雜，我們應(yīng)該把盡量多的精力放在主體段上面。

In conclusion, my view is that governments should spend money on services that benefit all members of society, and it is wrong to waste resources on projects that do not improve our everyday lives.

最后，給總結(jié)下我們托福大作文的一些注意點(diǎn)，大家在寫作時(shí)首先得把題目看清楚，不能偏題。其次在寫作時(shí)候要注意邏輯性，不僅僅是全文寫成總分總結(jié)構(gòu)，還要注意段落內(nèi)部的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意展開主體段時(shí)候的一個(gè)邏輯性和條理性。此外，寫托福大作文的時(shí)候大家要注意用詞的多樣性以及準(zhǔn)確性，而不是一味地用一些偏詞或者怪詞。最后一定得保證整篇文章是沒有語法錯(cuò)誤的。只有同時(shí)滿足這些條件，才能寫出一篇good的大作文，否則很多同學(xué)會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)每次大作文都卡在fair這一檔，上不去。

　　

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