2016年6月25日雅思寫作前瞻預測&范文

 按照我們前面講解的公式，寫出來就是這么三句話：

  1.Land degradation caused by over-grazing accounts for 35% of worldwide land degradation.   

2.The percentages of land degradation caused by deforestation and over-cultivation are alike, at 30% and 28% respectively.   

3.Only 7% of worldwide land degradation is caused by other reasons.  

大家在解餅圖的時候一定注意要把分子和分母確定正確了，然后再套用我們給出的三個公式，一定就能正確寫出餅圖，下面我附上這篇文章的一個范文，大家可以學習下：  

The given pie chart and table tells the causes for farmland deterioration and how three regions in the world were influenced by these reasons from 1990 to 1999.  

As is shown in the diagram, over-grazing is the main reason why land deteriorates. We can also see that the degradation was most noticeable in Europe during the given period in question.  

Land degradation caused by over-grazing accounts for 35% of worldwide land degradation. The percentages of land degradation caused by deforestation and over-cultivation are alike, at 30% and 28% respectively. Only 7% of worldwide land degradation is caused by other reasons.  

About 23% of land in Europe degraded, compared to 13% in Oceania and 5% in North America. Among three regions, the percentages of land degradation caused by deforestation and over-grazing in Europe were highest, at 9.8% and 7.7% respectively. The figure for over-grazing in Oceania was considerably higher than that in other two regions, while there was no concern related to over-cultivation. Among three regions, North America had the lowest percentage of land degradation caused by deforestation (0.2) and over-grazing (1.5).  

大作文的話，今天給大家講解下report類型的大作文：

首先大家看到是一篇report型大作文的考官范文  

Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?    

It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidising the industry.    

There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the James Bond films are examples of such productions and the global appeal that they have. Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison.    

In my view, governments should support local film industries financially. In every country, there may be talented amateur film-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for film crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality films. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the Rings' films, which were partly funded by government subsidies.    

In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market.  

在這篇范文中，大家可以看到我們寫report型大作文的時候，題目里面提出了幾個問題我們就寫出幾個主體段，在寫主體段的時候大家也是要按照general to specific的結構進行有效展開，論述清楚，結構一定要清晰，句式豐富地道寫出來就是一篇好的大作文。  

最后再給出大家一篇大作文的題目，大家可以模仿上一篇文章的寫法自己來寫寫，后面我也附上了參考范文，供大家參考：  

Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?    

Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can also take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. This essay will discuss environmental problems and the measures that governments and individuals can take to address these problems.    

Two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. As the human population increases, we are also producing ever greater quantities of waste, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.  

Governments could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution. They could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. They could also impose ‘green taxes’ on drivers and airline companies. In this way, people would be encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad, therefore reducing emissions.    

Individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment. They can take public transport rather than driving, choose products with less packaging, and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for shoppers as well as ‘banks’ for recycling glass, plastic and paper in their car parks. By reusing and recycling, we can help to reduce waste.    

In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must play their part in looking after the environment.    

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