今天給大家介紹下雅思寫作中大作文advatange/disadvantage類文章的寫法，并且學習下雅思寫作考官滿分范文，以及給同學們舉一個同學真考實例避免錯誤寫法。首先我們來了解一下雅思大作文的四種問法：
1.Agree （In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?）
2.Discuss （Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.？ Discuss both views and give your own opinion.）
3.Report （In many countries, more and more young people are leaving schools and unable to find jobs after graduation. What do you think youth unemployment青年失業(yè)問題 will cause to the individual and the society? And make some suggestions.）
4.Advantages/disadvantages （Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?）
在最近一段時間的雅思考試中，此類題目出現(xiàn)頻率也是比較高的，所以我們需要重點關注下這類題目的具體寫法。關于第四道題目也就是玩游戲到底是缺點多還是優(yōu)點多這個問題，有的同學可能會想寫成玩游戲好，然后主體段只寫優(yōu)點完全不提及缺點（合作意識/更聰明），或者寫成玩游戲不好主體段只寫缺點不提及優(yōu)點（身體健康帶來問題/影響孩子學習），但是這是否是最好的寫作方式呢，我們一起來看一下雅思考官是如何回答這個問題的。
按照這樣的思路，這篇文章究竟應該怎么寫呢，我們一起來看看考官是如何寫這種類型的文章的：
考官滿分范文：
Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.
On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.
However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.
通過對這篇文章的分析，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)寫這類文章的時候，優(yōu)點缺點都要去寫，如果認為有點多，那么寫優(yōu)點那段放在第三段的位置。相反，如果認為缺點更多，那么缺點那段放在第三段的位置即可。大家不難看出，如果你只寫優(yōu)點或者缺點，你會很難寫滿，所以大家之后在遇見這類型文章的時候，可以參考這樣的文章結(jié)構(gòu)進行寫作。
模仿上面那篇考官范文，大家可以思考下下面這篇文章的具體寫法：
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Here's our plan for a 4-paragraph essay:
1.Introduction: Topic = best age to learn a foreign language. Our opinion = better to learn at primary school age.
2.Disadvantages of learning languages at primary age: other subjects are more important at that age (maths, mother tongue language, science), learning a new language is confusing and wastes time, could delay development of child's first language.
3.Advantages of learning languages at primary age: young children learn faster, they are less self-conscious or shy, they pick up the pronunciation better, they enjoy copying and learning through games, nowadays languages are just as important as maths etc.
4.Conclusion: repeat / summarise our answer
此類題目，學生作文中存在的問題分析：
Some museums charge visitors for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
這是一篇真考過的文章，真實考試中分數(shù)是5.5分。那么這篇文章存在的問題首先是詞數(shù)不到，大概只有220左右，主要原因還是在主體段沒有充分展開。另外二三段總起句不夠突出，也就是說我們最好在二三段的第一句話把我們要講的內(nèi)容先進行概述，最后一段詞數(shù)過多，最后一段在真實考試中只需要重申下自己的觀點即可，所以，大家在真考中要注意避免這些問題，多多模仿考官的文章來進行寫作~
