很多學(xué)生在雅思寫作中邏輯性特別的弱,認(rèn)為在寫作的時候只要注意一些連接詞的使用如firstly,moreover或者關(guān)系詞如because, thus,therefore, although等的運(yùn)用,但是事實(shí)上,我們還需更加注意句與句之間內(nèi)部的邏輯關(guān)系,關(guān)鍵在內(nèi)容。
很多學(xué)生對于雅思寫作評分要求中邏輯性這一項(xiàng)上沒有清楚的認(rèn)識,認(rèn)為在寫作的時候只要注意一些連接詞的使用如firstly,moreover或者關(guān)系詞如because, thus,therefore, although等的運(yùn)用,但是事實(shí)上,我們還需更加注意句與句之間內(nèi)部的邏輯關(guān)系,關(guān)鍵在內(nèi)容。有很多學(xué)生也在糾結(jié)內(nèi)部到底應(yīng)該怎樣才叫具有邏輯性,一般我們在寫議論文遵循的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是:start with an idea, explain it in detail and give an example or two, 所以文章要注重from general to specific,一步步的從寬泛到具體,才是句與句之間邏輯性的最重要的要求。例如我們來看一下例文,針對于論證電腦對學(xué)習(xí)的壞處,即會使得我們的注意力不集中:First of all, one property of modern technology is harmful to any learning mind – it distracts. 中心句寫完之后,下一句話就可以開始解釋:電腦雖然先進(jìn),但是會提供一些不相干的鏈接,One thing we feel about when we are searching for information online is that the internet, as an outstanding example of modern technology and even regarded as the innovator of education, provides us with not only relevant results to make use of, but also external links to click.接下來可以舉例,去圖書館用電腦查資料最后會不自覺地點(diǎn)擊蹦出來的鏈接,最后忘了正事而去看視頻或者新聞, More than once I turned on my computer to check school library for resources, but ended up watching Youtube videos. In this case, computer as a representative of modern technology plays a negative role in learning information.
當(dāng)然在寫作時,除了注重關(guān)系詞的使用,我們還可以采取·Use this or these to refer to the idea in the previous sentence;Use pronouns like it and they to refer to nouns you have already used 即代詞或名詞指代,另外也可以Repeat a key word throughout the paragraph;Repeat a key idea in different ways 重復(fù)關(guān)鍵詞或關(guān)鍵思想去體現(xiàn)句與句之間的關(guān)系,這樣做也可以使我們的作文論證思路更清楚。
我們看一個例題,
Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society. However, there is still no agreement about what a perfect society would be like. What, in your opinion, would be the most important element of a perfect society? What can people do to help create an ideal society?針對于這個題目的第一個問題,完美的社會應(yīng)該具備什么樣的因素,我們可以采取上面所提到的的重復(fù)關(guān)鍵詞來解釋,體現(xiàn)句與句之間的邏輯性。If I had to choose the one, most desirable element of an ideal society, it would have to be safety. A safe society would be one in which crime did not exist, and in which all citizens trusted their neighbours, felt part of a community, and were even able to leave their doors unlocked without fear. A broader definition of safety could also include belief in state institutions, such as governments or police forces, and confidence that we are all protected by fair laws. In this sense, safety could be described as the most basic and the starting point for the creation of a perfect society. 范文中每句話都重復(fù)了關(guān)鍵詞safe或者safety, 雖然沒有用到一些表示原因結(jié)果或者轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)聯(lián)詞,但是整個段落邏輯性也特別強(qiáng),所以重復(fù)也是一種很好的邏輯論證的方式。
邏輯論證有很多方式,但是大家在寫作文時還是不能流于形式,而更應(yīng)注重自己的論證內(nèi)容。
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